Reviews for The Dance
whiteblue2912 chapter 10 . 12/24/2012
Great Story, Thank You!
frostedsoldier chapter 3 . 12/9/2009
Aw...I like it.
R E Z I A chapter 10 . 9/1/2009
that was adorable.i loved it,i've stayed up until 2 in the morning just to read it, and i have school in a few hours too. c:
dani101 chapter 5 . 8/7/2007
This story is so good. You have a nack for writing. I encourage you to continue on writing because it is VERY good!
threehalvesthere chapter 10 . 8/3/2007
I really liked that. Mad props ] I especially liked that the plot had something beside James love Lily Lily hates James LETS GO SNOG IN A CLOSET. Great job ]]
Lexie-H chapter 10 . 7/6/2007
WELL it was a rather awkward ending, of sorts, but the last line tied it in quite well. dancing as detention? highly unlikely but whatever, i guess, it worked for your plot... nice story!
Lexie-H chapter 9 . 7/6/2007
there is an advertisment, just under here, for kissing tips. lol how odd. equally odd, this chapter. lily and james really are all over the place! anywho, atleast james told his friends the lay of the land...
Lexie-H chapter 8 . 7/6/2007
well predictably you did explain yourself - but really, can't james just say "look marauders, i tried to get over her, i can't, i like her, she might like me, deal with it."

atleast thats what i hope he'd say... lol. boys are too much trouble
Lexie-H chapter 7 . 7/6/2007
what's with the sudden change of mood? i don't really understand it much although i'm sure you shall explain next chappy!
Lexie-H chapter 6 . 7/6/2007
this was very dramatic - lots of capitals and waving of arms, so far as i could tell... you set the atmosphere nicely but i think it got just *so* much that i had difficultly following what happened. if you could, a brief explanation of *how* james hurt himself would be deeply appreciated, even if it does leave me feeling mildly stupid in the end lol
Lexie-H chapter 5 . 7/6/2007
secret passages through trees? is it just me or is this very Faraway Tree? (enid blyton)
Lexie-H chapter 4 . 7/6/2007
lol a great cliffie indeed... and a romantic, lovely piece of fluff. i have no idea where this story is taking me and to be honest i dont care, cos where-ever its going, its quite fun! my only issue is with some of your punctuation, capitalisation etc which could be easily fixed by running this through the spell check
Lexie-H chapter 2 . 7/6/2007
oh the value of a good jumper... lol. can i confess to stealing one of my boys jumpers? for some strange reason they;re always warmer! you took such an ordinary thing and turned it into such a cute aspect of this story. wit, i applaud you
Lexie-H chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
i find this very random - maybe you explain this whole thing a little more in later chapters?
Crystalsxyz chapter 2 . 6/10/2007
This is amazing! I've only read two chapters and I love it already. I smiled the whole time I was reading it! Very cute and smart!
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