Reviews for Couldn't let go
less than four chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
Good, but one thing really bugged me.

Switch in POV’s this is Bella’s POV which most of the story will be written in, I just felt that Edward deserved his little in put at the beginning.

You don't need that. Just write 'Bella POV' or 'BPOV' (we're smart kids, we'll figure it out). Writing all that detracts from the story and makes it harder to read, breaks up the parts.
Book.Luver.14 chapter 10 . 9/14/2007
omc plz add more to i t
Annilaia chapter 10 . 9/14/2007
Ah I really really liked that sashapants!

So i have to ... freaking find a way to get to the post office on monday because its not open during the weekends. BO. yeah. anyway. good job! i thougt it was written quite well!
Bobby Rae chapter 10 . 9/14/2007
Please please update
LaurenLovesDracoMalfoyTheMost chapter 9 . 8/16/2007
cute

update

plz
AnAerialView chapter 9 . 7/13/2007
I like chapter 8. I think that you should just add onto that chapter or continue to chapter 9. But chapter 8 was cute and fluffy. :D
Frannie-pants chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
really sad, but really good. great job!
MeaganKatherine chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
OMG i totally love this story! Bella and Edward are the greatest couple ever! keep going :D
ridiculouskopec chapter 5 . 7/12/2007
MUSE IS THE BEST. m i have 5 of their albums.. love them all :)
ridiculouskopec chapter 2 . 7/12/2007
ahh intenseness to the max!1 love it! but.. she hasn't read the letter! noo~ readd! i vant to know vut it says!
Classic Esperanza chapter 8 . 7/3/2007
Two months since last update?

AW :[
vjd chapter 8 . 6/9/2007
I like it it's good...UPDATE soon PLZ!
Says The Schizophrenic chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
i think new moon chap.3, should of been like this, cuz then the book wouldent be so sad:P
GoodyGoody23 chapter 8 . 5/21/2007
Good. Please update soon.
Warui-Usagi chapter 8 . 5/10/2007
Nice. :) Update again soon, ya hear?
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