Reviews for Breeding Fear
FloridaMagpie chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Great imagery, very interesting viewpoint. There are just a couple of small awkward word choices here and there, but that could just be my individual taste. I'd have used a different word than "mature" to describe a night, although I get the connection to the biological processes of the cryssalid. Also "transmute" is usually used to describe the changing of one inert substance into another - there's probably a better word that could be used there as well, like transform, mutate, evolve, transfigure, etc.

Overall, though, very little to complain about here. Very strong writing and a good thought-provoking read. Great work!
Stormbringer951 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
You've captured the atmosphere of X-Com perfectly here. The tension, the alien-ness of it all. I never did like those damn chrysalids...
Greg Hopper chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Excellent! I really enjoyed reading this, maybe I'll go play some X-COM now.
Taerwriter chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
Nice (never expected to see this game, but...) just a tad to omniscent. Stiill- Way to go!
Nope chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
Well that was a nice little story but if you ever get around to it make one on a higher up alien than that mkay?