Reviews for Steps Ahead
Alucius chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Well written. Keep up the good work. If this isn't a one-shot, I think its deserving of continuation.
Takako chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
You have no idea how happy I am to see a NEW FIC by you! I've been searching for some quality Nejiten goodness and was on the verge to give up and go to sleep WHEN I SAW UR FIC!

Really well written as usual, I love the dialogue b/t Neji and Tenten, it fits them so well. And I love the part where Neji unties her hair! Gosh you HAVE TO WRITE MORE!
matchaball chapter 1 . 12/21/2006

I love it x3

6StringSamurai13 chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
Aww...that was really cute. Interesting topic for the story seeing as how we always see the characters as superhuman; it's nice to see a bit of normalcy. Good job on TenTen's characterization, you really captured her personality. Loved the dialogue which was exactly how I'd imagine the two would speak with each other; perfectly platonic from a strangers POV yet laced with care. Good job on the imagery especially when Tenten was observing and thinking about Neji. Loved it, keep up the good work!
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