Reviews for Espresso and Hotcakes
ihatewriting chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
I love how you portray Temari.
vanyelashke89 chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
cute story. i liked it (:
xxguesswhoxx chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
lolz how can his mom not know she's there! XD
mintmelodygirl chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
nice use of figuartive langage, and it's very good for something that had no planing.
Loverly-Loving Fool chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
aw so cute!
Setus chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
In light of what you reviewed me in my story with the same old pairing that appeared in your story some centuries ago, i thought i should return the favour. first off, i must say i thought you were a better writer than i am, considering what you said about me using jap in an English story. well, for that a matter, you might want to consider using more punctuation, and the correct ones at the very least, with some spelling and grammar check thrown in. lastly, just like how you ended your review for me, fool!
Miss Pretty Socks chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Umm so...I don't think this could get any better! Honestly, my favourite pairing and artist all in one fanfic! Ridiculous! Haha, just gotta love Jack Johnson songs, Banana Pancakes is I believe number 4 on my songs list, Traffic In The Sky is my first. :D Anyways, enough about me, you story was terrific and I applaud you! :D
Dragon P chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
“Don’t get smart with me – you’ll regret it”

Try to fix the quot that comes after that one, because you repeated a word. Other than that I'll rate 9/10

1 bonus for the cute title.
xNatto chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Even though I knew it was eventual ShikaxTema, I enjoyed the mystery you maintained throughout the beggening.

A nice ShikaxTema fanfiction is more often than not a rare pleasure for me. I enjoy seeing the pairing from someone else's point of view.

Thank you for this, I really enjoyed it.