Reviews for Fly Ball
Music1998 chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
This is really
Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Wow that was terrible. You never really said what bellas power was and edward and bella wouldnt talk like that. Drag? Are you serious? This looks like some peice of crap story you slapped together last minute. Please get off this website. You are making a mockery of all the REAL twilight writers, you are a joke.
Phoenix Fanatic chapter 1 . 4/24/2009

Great story!
lilith draven chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
thats amusing love it

EverythingTwilight chapter 1 . 5/27/2008

Siren chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Ha! Take that cocky male egotistical vampire boyfriend! Nice! Love her power.


Don't Hit Kids.

No. Seriously.

They Have Guns Now.
JennCorinthos chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
This was so great... I loved it...

gakar chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
This was really good, it was funny, I would LOVE to read when they go to the club, but anyways very good, and very funny, Congratz, very good work
EdwardLover44 chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
iloveebfanfics chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
haha, i was laughing so hard. its a good story :]
FriendofFoes chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
LOL! I loved it! I always thought Bella's power should be telekinetis (SP?) Anyway, very good story. The boys beaten at their favorite game...He, He, He...
Dawnaven chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
This was so funny! Especially when Edward couldn't hit the ball...Bella's power is cool!
scarredvines chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
Oh my gosh, very hilarious! I can't believe that a story this simple could be so funny...*sighs* Love the story! ~Silver
stacey chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! i REALLY want to read about the club! HA! poor guys! they deserved it though! HAHA! - an author...and a fan of this hillarious story
krv10 chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
wow, love the story! it's so cool! update asap please!
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