Reviews for Anathema's Abode |
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![]() ![]() Well, crap! |
![]() ![]() Another beautiful chapter. I quite like our regal Danny |
![]() ![]() I love all the political intrigue in this story! It is quite excellent! I also think you'very done a good job of capturing the anxiety that accompanies Danny and Sam''s deceptions |
![]() ![]() OH NOOOOOOOO! |
![]() ![]() Dude. You straight-up copied paragraphs from a previous chapter as the start of this one. I know you wanted to reiterate some points, but maybe you could have changed things up a little? That was a little disappointing, especially since the rest of the story has been so good! I haven't read the rest if the chapter yet, but I'm sure it's good too :) |
![]() ![]() Well hot diggity damn! That was unexpected, on all accounts! What us the brotherhood''s relationship with Ember? DUn dun dunnnmn! |
![]() ![]() :'( |
![]() ![]() Damm, that was EPIC! (THE footage of Danny as the general). I hope he gets Sam to talk to him, because this could take a very sour turn. I think you've written Sam very well. I found her breakdown to be quite believable in this chapter :) |
![]() ![]() Well hot diggity! That was unexpected! |
![]() ![]() Oh, Sam. |
![]() ![]() Love your incorporation of the side characters! |
![]() ![]() Buddy, you are so, so wrong about Phantom's identity. *facepalm*. I hope that doesn't cause any problems later. |
![]() ![]() Me gusta! |
![]() ![]() Oh, I LOVE this! Great chapter! Lots of intrigue and mystery! And poor Sam has no idea how much she's being played... |
![]() ![]() ...it's just soooo good...what are pity it's discontinued... |