Reviews for The White Flag
Shadowstar chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Good story, thanks for publishing it. I think I'll read it a few more times.
Emmers224 chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
i love it! very very VERY funny! i couldnt stop laughing. excelent!
BethTX chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Wonderful! Perfectly placed humor along with the introspection. I especially loved the line: "He had pictured her as Gollum, skinny and voracious, cooing What has it got in its pocketses, Precious?"
Emmchen1 chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Oh, why can't this be the canon version? I'd love to see this acted out on TV.

Superb writing.
graybaby1 chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
This is great! I really liked that you made it a "Triumph" Pretty cool.
WuHaoNi chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Loved this little story! Especially "What has it got in its pocketses, Precious?" Very funny!
KidsNurse chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Beautiful-just perfect. Loved the double meaning with 'Triumph.'

Ivy3 chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Such an adorable fic! Short and sweet, glad those two are friends again, their exchange was so great.
Enfleurage chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Wow! That was a perfect little gem of a story. You absolutely NAILED House, his interior monologue, his dialogue, his attitude towards Wilson, Chase, Foreman and Cameron. Excellent insight. And you were spot on with Wilson too.

The miniature motorcyle was inspired, and it was a nice touch to make it a miniature of Hugh Laurie's favorite motorcycle. I love when authors take the time to really get the details right and you did, all throughout this story.

Well done. Very well done.
Double Dog chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Terrific story.

Recommended on TWoP. Looking forward so much to new stories from you.
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