Reviews for Beautiful Mistake
Reddi chapter 6 . 1/7/2008
really glad to see you are still writing this one (and writing AMC fics). I don't watch the show anymore, and every time I look at a scene out of curiosity the dang show is worse than it was before.. it's nice to read a fic that has all the characters I loved in it... it's almost like watching the show again.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 6 . 11/21/2007
Love this line, even though it is so heartbreaking.

He had promised her the same thing, but… but it was different, and it was a different that broke her.

Thrilled to see you updated. There are not enough stories about K and R. To me they are a supercouple. Love that you are writing about them.

The part about Ryan and his dream was fantastic. Looking forward to seeing what happens next with this story.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 5 . 4/16/2007
Great song choice.

Awesome sentence

Babe destroyed everything she touched, even if she was too stupid to realize it.

Love that you gave Jack a POV. First time I have ever seen that in a fic.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 4 . 4/16/2007
You really tapped into the pain of Ryan and Kendall. I feel so bad for them both. But I hope that Ryan will soon be by her side in this story.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 3 . 4/16/2007
Kendall could handle hangovers; it was the dead babies and broken hearts that she was drowning in.

What an amazing sentence! It really hits you square in the chest.

I also liked the line about Lena.

and this line

And, God, it had been one beautiful mistake, for a heartbeat there.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 2 . 4/16/2007
I adored the quiet intensity of the David section.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
I love your writing style. You have me caught up in this story already.
minkie chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Interesting beginning!

I'm guessing...it's JR in the hospital instead of Binks this time?
Reddi chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Great hook. You got my attention!