|Reviews for Blinded by Darkness, will you be my Light?|
| Jun-I chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
"The first snowfall of winter, feather-light and soft, flutters down from the deeply dark night."
That's a beautiful line. Sounds almost haiku-ish :-)
"He will die one day for the Lady Death will come and take him as no one can evade her forever for her brother Fate who will write his name down in that great big book of his."
This is powerful imagery but the sentence is rather long. Maybe breaking it into two sentences will make the rhythm more forceful. Then again I have a shorter attention span than the average person, so my perspective might be unusual.
“I am Darkness, dance with me.”
Nice alliteration. :-)
And btw, Getbackers has ample yaoi hints, or is it just me? ;-)
| Attiqah Gensui chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
wow..'another nice piece bu zan,
Loved the atmosphere in teh ficcy.
Happy new year and belated xmas!
| thisisvoid chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
Nice little ficcie.
| Amethyst Hunter chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
This is beautiful! You captured Akabane's essence in loving detail. Great fic. :)
| sweetheart juicebox3 chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
*I* liked it! great job, by the way