Reviews for Too Perfect To Feel
CeKhay chapter 10 . 4/21/2008
Wow its been awhile since I read this, and I just caught up and one of my characters showed up! Haha, can't wait for your next update!
rosewolfofheaven chapter 3 . 11/20/2007
P-chan is not sexualy active and has no boyfriend. She does like koga though she never shows or admits it. and she only smokes cigerettes when she is stressed out same goes for drinking. She has been made fun of most of her life but usualy makes them mad by saying something calmly smart assed back
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
I seriously LUV This story and I hope u didn't stop wrting, 'cause I'm starting 2 tell my friends about it. PLEASE DON'T STOP! Nywasys, I 4got a character; Kaori's broter. Kaori is my 1st charactr. She's the one ploting against Kagi.

Name:Kaito

Gender: male

Age:15

Grade: frshman

Species: haynou, water sprite(or dragon. U choose)

Family Financial Status: rich

Physical Appearance: red with brown higlights

eye color-sea green(dark red when angry)

skin tone- tan

Fitness- ripped/slender

hair length- in a ponytail, reaches his butt

piercing- one on his right ear, 1 on his left

tattoos-none

birthmarks-none

waxed chest-his chest insn't waxed,but no hair

hairy back-no

freckles-none

Good Attributes: boys- nice butt, big arms, big package

Clique: smart but not geek/loner

Social Status (at school): popular

Style (clothing):blue and black jeans, designer shoes, wears white beater under all of his shirts(opened)

Personality:nice/sweet/stubborn

Family Members: 1sister(Kaori), mother(32), father (35)

Family History: his mother was a famous singer and his father was her manager. His older sister plans on bing n flawless

Enemies: no one hates him;girls think he should b flawless 'cause of looks, but some guys r jealous and think he's not all that

Friends: friends n every clique and one girl who later commits suicide after their performance 2gethr(Kasumi)

Talents:writes novels,sings,dances(not n public)

Powers:water powers

Other Things: At 1st he joins the contest w/ Kasumi bcause she can sing but later develops feelings 4 her

Does he/she smoke? not ny more

Has he/she ever smoked?yes

Does he/she do drugs? no drugs

Has he/she ever done drugs? What kind? none

Does/has he/she drink? When and how much? few swallows, usually at a party

Has he/she ever been drunk? once while with his sister

Is he/she a virgin? yeah

Are they currently sexually active? With whom?no one

Ever been kissed?yeah

Ever made-out?yeah

Ever kissed same sex?no

Ideas for future career?a novelist-doesn't think he's good enough 2 b an entertainer(but he is)

Ever been abused? (physically or verbally) By whom?his sistr

Ever had a boyfriend/girlfriend?had a gf,

Ever gone on a date?yeah

Are they new to this school?yep

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I made a mistake and said that Kasumi was a snob;she's not. Also, I prefe keep ur original writing style,but i luv it! once again, great story. Hope u continue. PLEASE DO! XD
Zakuro17 chapter 10 . 8/26/2007
Hi! I have more than one chractr.

Ok, I do have evil ppl, and I do have seniors and Frshmen, but I also have othr charactrs that I'd like 2 add 4 the competition.

my 1st 3 charters r the ones I really want n the story!

Name: Kaori

Gender: female

Age:same age as Kag

Grade: same grade as kag

Species:haynou,u can choose. thinking dragon or something

Family Financial Status: rich

Physical Appearance: hair color-black

eye color-red

skin tone-tan

Fitness-curvy

hair length-long, slightly shorter than manga Kag's

piercing-2 on ears

tattoos-if a flawless can have one, she has one

birthmarks-on her lip

Good Attributes: girls-nice butt, big boobs, long legs, small waist

Clique: prep

Social Status (at school): was a flawless at her former school; now popular

Style (clothing): mini skirts, blue jean(designer)apple bottom shoes,half jackets, wears tank tops, big hoopy earrings, necklace,can b slutty

Personality: bitchy/stubborn/stuckup/snob/slutty/violent

Family Members: 1brother(frshman), mother(32), father (35),

Family History: her mother was a famous singer and her father was her manager. Her younger brother now sings and decides 2 join the music contest w/ anothr charactr I made

Enemies: any cligues blow her and Kag whem she has a hard time getting n2 flawless

Friends: afew friends here and there

Talents:um...she can dance

Powers:whatever deals with fire, she can do

Other Things: wants2 b queen of flawless and plots 2 rid Inu of Kag

Does he/she smoke? at times

Has he/she ever smoked? yeah

Does he/she do drugs? no

Has he/she ever done drugs? At a party,they put drugs n the aspririn bottle, not sure what kind, mabye hormanal(not trying 2 b nasty XO)

Does/has he/she drink? When and how much? she does drink when she's pissed-sometimes a whole bottle, sometimes a few swallows

Has he/she ever been drunk?yep

Is he/she a virgin?I guess not

Are they currently sexually active? With whom?some college guy who leaves her

Ever been kissed?yep

Ever made-out?yeppers

Ever kissed same sex?uh...no

Ideas for future career? 2 dance

Ever been abused? By whom?her boyfriend who dumps her 4 lying about her age and crap

Ever had a boyfriend/girlfriend?yep

Ever gone on a date?plenty

Are they new to this school?yep

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Name:Hideaki

Gender: male

Age:17/18

Grade: senior

Species: haynou, white wolf

Family Financial Status: rich/average/

Physical Appearance: hair color-dark brown,light brown higlights

eye color-green

skin tone tan

Fitness ripped/buff/tonedslender

hair length right below shoulders

piercing- one on his right ear, 3 on his left

tattoos-none

birthmarks-none

waxed chest-his chest insn't waxed,but no hair

hairy back-no

freckles-none

Good Attributes: boys- nice butt, big arms, big package

Clique: smart but not geek/loner

Social Status (at school): should b flawless, but refused 2 popular

Style (clothing):blue and black jeans, tenis and nike shoes, hoodies(stylish)

Personality:nice/sweet/stubborn/mildy violent

Family Members: 2brothers (one 23, the othr would b 16, but died,1 sister 15, mother(divorced 42), father(remaried 43),

Family History: parents had a feud, now mom is average and dad is rich. He lives alon, but gets income from both parents

Enemies: no one hates him;girls think he should b flawless 'cause of looks, boys think 'cause he's an athlete

Friends: friends n every clique and one girl who later commits suicide

Talents:an artist, cook

Powers:speak 2 wolves, wolf-like abitities,stronger than anime Inu

Other Things: once again, everyone thought that he should b n flawless, but he doesn't like their attitudes

Does he/she smoke? not ny more

Has he/she ever smoked?yes

Does he/she do drugs? no drugs

Has he/she ever done drugs? What kind? none

Does/has he/she drink? When and how much?everyonce in a while, he takes a few swallows, usually at a party

Has he/she ever been drunk? no, never got that far

Is he/she a virgin? yeah

Are they currently sexually active? With whom?no one

Ever been kissed?yeah

Ever made-out?once

Ever kissed same sex?no

Ideas for future career?he's carefree

Ever been abused? (physically or verbally) By whom?his parents

Ever had a boyfriend/girlfriend?had a gf, but they ended up at difrent schools

Ever gone on a date?yeah

Are they new to this school?no

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Name:Kasumi

Gender: female

Age:17

Grade: senior

Species: (human

Family Financial Status: average

Physical Appearance: hair color-black

eye color-ocean blue

skin tone- pale

Fitness -slender/skinny

hair length-stops above butt

piercing-only the two on her ears

tattoos-none

birthmarks-under her eye

waxed chest-no

hairy back-no

freckles-as a child she did

Good Attributes long legs, small waist

Clique:nobody/smart but not geek/loner

Social Status (at school): known within friends

Style (clothing): tea lenth skirts,slacks,raely wears blue jeans,usually wedges shoes jacket(like Hinata's from Naruto)

no tank tops,small hoop earrings,necklace,bracelet jewelry

Personality: nice/sweet/ up/snob/depressed

Family Members:1brother(19)1 sister(14) mother(30) father(30)

Family History: normal family, both parents working, no one understands Kasumi tho

Enemies: none

Friends: her closest friend is Hideaki

Talents:can sing;getsn competition with Kaori's bro, but dies

Powers:none

Other Things:kids at school were jealous of her model-like figure and teased her 4nothing,she jumped off of a building after taking sleeping drugs

Does he/she smoke?no

Has he/she ever smoked?no

Does he/she do drugs? If so, what kind?none

Has he/she ever done drugs? What kind?sleeping pills

Does/has he/she drink? When and how much?none

Has he/she ever been drunk?no

Is he/she a virgin?yes

Are they currently sexually active? With whom?noone

Ever been kissed?only on the cheek

Ever made-out?no

Ever kissed same sex?no

Ideas for future career?none

Ever been abused? (physically or verbally) By whom? lots of people do it 4 no reason like her parents and kids at school who don't know her

Ever had a boyfriend/girlfriend?no

Ever gone on a date?no

Are they new to this school?no

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Name:Misaki

Gender: female

Age:15

Grade: Frshmen

Species: used2b miko

Family Financial Status: rich

Physical Appearance:hair color-brown

eye color-hazel

skin tone pale

Fitness- slender/skinny

hair length-hits at shoulders

piercing-only ears at 1st,but sneeks and gets one on her belly

tattoos-once again sneeks

birthmarks-none

freckles-light brown

Good Attributes: girls-nice butt, big boobs,mid size waist

Clique: punk/smart but not geek/rebel

Social Status (at school): was popular,ended as hated,envied

Style (clothing): skin tight designer skirts,pants,jeans, jakets?, tank tops. Wears designer shoes,earrings, and jewelry.

Personality: bitchy/nice/stubborn/ended up slutty/mildly violent/

Family Members: mother(27) father(31)

Family History:father retired from owning a whole lot of land. Now writes books since their income is so big

Enemies: (other cliques? specific person?)girls who liked her Bf(boyfriend) and the flawless bcause she openly curses them out

Friends: not many, alomst all n her class/cliques

Talents:she can dance

Powers:lost them

Other Things:she got pregnant by a demon and ost her miko abilities

Does he/she smoke?no

Has he/she ever smoked?yes

Does he/she do drugs? If so, what kind? crack

Has he/she ever done drugs? What kind?crack

Does/has he/she drink? When and how much?alot just 4 fun

Has he/she ever been drunk?yes,plenty of times

Is he/she a virgin?not any more

Are they currently sexually active? With whom? a demon,don't care who

Ever been kissed?yes

Ever made-out?yes

Ever kissed same sex?yes

Ideas for future career?stripper

Ever been abused? (physically or verbally) By whom?her dad

Ever had a boyfriend/girlfriend?both

Ever gone on a date?yep

Are they new to this school?yep

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GREAT STORY! Um, how did Roku and Inu get away w/saying d*m* and Kag saying S*i* in school announcements? (2 funny!) I really want at least one of my charactrs n ur story. (btw, my lst charactr is evil, kinda)

hope u like my charactrs. If u have questions about my ppls(if u want 2 use them) then let me kno!
Say0mi Saki chapter 10 . 8/7/2007
I LOVE it everything is so well written its so hard not to love! I hope u start updating again Im too hooked to stop right now im pouting there wasnt more! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it PLZ update SOON! ur such a great writer!
Say0mi Saki chapter 9 . 8/7/2007
aw what did that guy mean in the last chapter about staying away from kagz? how he knew wat yash was up to? im confused!
Say0mi Saki chapter 8 . 8/7/2007
so did anything really happen between kags and inu in the past?
Say0mi Saki chapter 7 . 8/7/2007
aw I hope Sango dnt stay mad! i am in lub wit ur fic
Say0mi Saki chapter 6 . 8/7/2007
eek that so cute but dey dnt go out rite? so dey just like flirt?
Say0mi Saki chapter 5 . 8/7/2007
lol I like this guy but i hope he dnt end up with kaggzie!
Say0mi Saki chapter 4 . 8/7/2007
lol interesting -pout- aw I wished Sango was in the "flawless" but at how wow ur work is goin Im juz gon read on amazed at how well written everything is!
Say0mi Saki chapter 3 . 8/7/2007
loved it lol
Say0mi Saki chapter 2 . 8/7/2007
Does he/she smoke?:yes

Has he/she ever smoked?:when REALLY stressed

Does he/she do drugs? no

Has he/she ever done drugs? What kind? no

Does/has he/she drink? When and how much?: yes, a little before getting drunk

Has he/she ever been drunk? yes

Is he/she a virgin? yes

Are they currently sexually active? With whom?: no one

Ever been kissed?:yes

Ever made-out?:yes

Ever kissed same sex?:when drunk once

Ideas for future career?:actress? huh? confused as in job? if so then actress

Ever been abused? (physically or verbally): yes verbally by snobs, populars, sluts, guys

Ever had a boyfriend/girlfriend?: yes

Ever gone on a date?: no

Are they new to this school:yes
Say0mi Saki chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
hmm? if its still okay I'm filling one out...

Name:Sayomi

Gender: female

Age: 16

Grade: which ever grade I need to be in

Species: human?

Family Financial Status: rich but ppl dnt know

Physical Appearance: (hair color: auborn

eye color:hazel

skin tone: (tan)

Fitness average? curvy?

hair length: shoulder length

piercing: ears and naval

tattoos:cherry on ankle

birthmarks:none

waxed chest?: uh...awkward question

hairy back: NO

freckles: no

Good Attributes: (girls-curved hips, good sized chest, pouty lips)

Clique: the nice girl who hangs out with different ppl?

Social Status (at school): the average nothing special girl

Style (clothing): jeans:applebottoms shoes:flats jackets: cropped jean jacket tank tops: white

Personality:nice,depressed,shy, secretly wishes to be popular

Family Members: (brother: 1 and 6 yrs old mom: 36

Family History: (feuds:sluts

friendships:good group

fame:only known with friends

Enemies: (other cliques:normals specific person: kikyo? a real person I have a feud with is a bop named mimi...

Friends: I'd like to be friends with Kagome and hopefully Sango if she's in this fic which HOPEFULLY she is.

Talents:acting? writing...poetry

Powers: nothing?

Other Things: (anything else that might be important?)none
Neko in a Parka chapter 9 . 7/13/2007
hey guess what i'm finally on again! yay i liked this one!
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