Reviews for The Diet
yenoh chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I Read This Story a few Years 's still 's Better Than Mine.
Koi chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Ohgod- that was just wonderful. xD
PrincessJaded chapter 1 . 5/25/2009

This was great!
crzy sphopath with an axe chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
ilike the story but you need to add actions to the story otherwise it is one of the best I have read also mother fucker I like cussing
SugarSpiral chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Love it.

It got a leetle confusing, but it's still utter brilliance.
Crimsondramon X chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
I'm pretty sure Gatomon can convince Patamon to try the diet One way or another.
tajikistan9696 chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Haha, that was very silly. :D

Nice Job. :D
OnlineWarrior094 chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
confusing, but undeniably hilarous, brilliant.


BATPIG! lol.
Rainbow chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
I don't get it. And its kinda confusing.
Says TB chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
you got me smiling from the very beginning. this was very cute, and you characterized everyone's favourite 'batpig' perfectly! haha. the interaction between hikari and takeru were fun to read as well. for me, it was hard to distinguish at some (just a few) parts who was speaking, but overall great job ) hope you write more.
EnergyHawk chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
Lol, little greedy batpig... That is HILARIOUS! lol, my sides hurt!


Brosis chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
love it! not bad, but you really have to cut the talking part. i don't even know which is which
Kokeshi Kitty chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
Totally hilarious! *Dies of excessive laughing*
TheLon3Wolf8986 chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
i like it, although i would hav liked a bit more description about what was happening and some instances where i was confused on who was talking, but overall i loved it. 8.9-very good
ConquerorAlexander chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
LOL, here I though Patamon was a healthy chubby, not a "serverly over weight" digimon. Lol, my cat is 20 pounds :3 Funny fic, just a little confusing towards the end
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