I just discovered this story. Very impressive writing! I really enjoyed it. You conveyed all of their emotions so well. Thank you!

I keep seeing this story recommended and finally sought it out! It's is fully deserving of all the praise. Such a perfect complete story and a fascinating central idea, with the timelines.

I love all your characters, especially Jess, it's always good to see her a as a fully formed person.

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Awesome plot. Awesome characters. Awesome everything.

Done.

Complex, fascinating story. Thank you.

I reread this and it's still as amazing as ever, if not even better the second time around.

Great story!

Bravo. I am glad I had a chance to read this story, it is so engaging and triumphant without being sappy. The angst and suspense and the insightful POVs really satisfy. Thank you for sharing. :)

Oh sweet relief! I hope Jess, Dean and Sam can keep working together and get a win.

Way to go, Jess. She has pushed through the exhaustion and pain to put a lot of the pieces together and come up with some strategies.

I get that Dean is past his considerable limit and he doesn't know anything about healthy coping; he's spent. It's still so frustrating to see him freeze Sam out. Hopefully Jessica is sounding his wake up call. ;)

I like that you went to angels with this story, it fits. I don't know if you wrote this in prior to their entry on Show season 4, but you nail the "angels are dicks" motif and whole heavenly censorship thing.

There's a sense of progress with the plot - our little family is down but not out - but I don't know ultimately how hopeful or damning the the story will end and I enjoy the ambiguity.

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Ahem, this is exciting. Excuse me while I calmly proceed to the next chapter. ;)

Ooooh, two Deans! Maybe some clues about what's going on? Pretty please?

This is so serrating. I can't stop reading.

Yeah, I've been wondering what would happen (what would change) if Ellicot possesses Jessica... I really don't know and am keen to find out. ;)