Reviews for The Demon Prince of Konoha |
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![]() ![]() You said Temari didn't get close to any other guy previously because her siblings are overprotective and she wasn't interested in romance, then in this chapter she kissed some random OC in a flashback lmao |
![]() ![]() We're the fuck is NARUTO you know the main fucking character you limp dick |
![]() ![]() cool story so far but you lose me at the age. She's 19? I just can't imagine being that old and taking the chunin exams. there are some things from canon that should stay the same. |
![]() ![]() ![]() temari |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't really like konohamaru, even more if he embarrassed tayuya like that. no shit tayuya best girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL What a fucking joke. I hope your shitty fucking book failed and was abandoned just like this. I can't fucking believe you didn't post that this was abandoned until this last fucking chapter. Go fucking die you stupid fucking bitch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait the question is what happened to toru? he/she was alive i am pretty sure and i dont think that person will just back off just like that. also the demon... i think naruto should have been the king of demon realm as 9 tails is the king unless they have chosen a new one, which is very unlikely because i dont believe they can find someone as powerful as kurama. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is actually a fun idea. Nice Beauty and the Beast spice added to a world of magical super ninjas. |
![]() ![]() Great story. |
![]() ![]() Couldve spaced the last chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last chapter was a bit lazy but other then that it was fine |
![]() ![]() It's just the prologue so I am guessing that is why it was short, but that was a nice setup. We got all the information needed without being properly introduced to the main character yet, even better than that you had no noticeable typos or grammatical errors which are so common on this site. Your writing is also kind of to my liking, not really my style but good nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() Holy poops, this is an incredible story! |