Reviews for The Demon Prince of Konoha
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 12 . 10/13/2016
*smirk* silly Fox, Naruto's gut instinct was right on the money. He went from a friend to a dear sweet friend with that question. People underestimate the effectiveness of ernesty.
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 8 . 10/13/2016
I'm still worried about my Bun-chan. I'm okay with her losing to Temari, the wind mistress was just better. But did she have to do that bullshit with the fan and nearly breaking her back. That moment insured Temari would never make it in my top 10.
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 4/11/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
StoneTheLoner chapter 11 . 1/28/2016
This chapter was poorly done, as it made me loose interest in this story. Shame :(
QueenDeedee chapter 22 . 12/29/2015
I'm going to be honest, I was a bit disappointed when you said you weren't finishing this, and almost didn't read the outline.
But I'm glad I did, you had a really good plot and I know how hard it is to write when you're lacking inspiration. All in all, I really liked the story, it was really original and well developed.
Thank you for the wrap-up, I reallyappreciated it.
I hope you do really well in your original work!
xNaruHina chapter 22 . 12/22/2015
It is a shame that you couldn't finish the story as it was an amazing story, however I do understand why and you did what most authors did not: you posted an outline of all the plans you had for the story and I am sure that all of your readers appreciated your thoughtfulness and generosity immensely.
DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
Impressive prologue, the 1st chapter is going to be amazing after seeing this masterpiece!
Guest chapter 22 . 11/29/2015
I wish the final chapter was better written but over all this was an amazing story to read. Narutema are my babies.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/27/2015
as temari and her lover Naruto move in his hom she sleep in bed with him and the2 had sex as some hot loves she bing ahot fox like love and Queen with Naruto as will kim lee and sakura too nauo new slves grils
naruto kurama chapter 22 . 5/29/2015
naruto kurama chapter 11 . 5/28/2015
Sizzin chapter 11 . 4/19/2015
Yashamaru? Is this the guy who tried to assassinate him in his childhood or an OC? hmm
Sizzin chapter 3 . 4/19/2015
Intriguing. I'm curious as to what exactly Naruto is.
Sizzin chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
An interesting prologue, let's see how it's developed.
chthonian chapter 18 . 4/1/2015
Alright so pretty interesting story idea but I have one problem, when tsutsume is first introduced I'm pretty sure it's stated it has two tails then you repeatedly call it a sanbi then one time during his fight with orochimaru you say all four tails and then barely two paragraphs down its back to three so what is it? Pick a number and stick with it
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