Reviews for Lunar Expedition
Of Chaos and Destruction chapter 17 . 7/2
This is not a finished story, please take that 'Complete' notice down. The most interesting (to me, at least) parts of the story (reconciliation between the parents & planets and the Senshi, whatever happens with chibi moon and the youma & Helios, the worlds longer term response to aliens in the solar system in general, and the moon/senshi in particular - is there even going to be a Crystal Tokyo now? Will Usagi be the new Moon Queen? Are there any survivors of the Moon Kingdom apart from Night Serenity?) have not been written - and from the looks of your sequel/prequel, may never be.

Otherwise, I like the story a lot - which is why its abandonment at this late and interesting stage is such a disappointment.


PrincessRaena SS chapter 1 . 5/3/2016
It was an incredible story but ended so abruptly. Please do come back and continue it. What was Adonis seeing? Will the other planets meet with the scouts? How do they all react to meeting one another? How do the people react to the silver millennium? Do the royals reconcile now that they know who is who? What is Bran's role from now on? Do Chibiusa and Helios meet?

You created a whole new world here and there are so many of us who want to see it sculpted even more
lunamoon0320 chapter 1 . 1/21/2016
If you still get these notifications please come back and finish the next part of this story.
Anon chapter 16 . 7/21/2015
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. It is complex, unique in its premise and so interesting. Your talents as an author and creativity shine through.

I look forward to reading more in this series. I especially look forward to when Usagi and Mamoru finally meet their Silver Millenium parents.

I understand life happens and it may take you time to complete this series, but I will be keeping an eye out for further updates - your story is worth the wait! :)
Blind Bird chapter 17 . 9/30/2013's the rest of the story? It said it was complete. You have the rising action, but there is no climax, no resolution, it just ends. How sad. Was good for part, but it turned out to be a big disappointment. Hope you decide to actually finish it one day. Would be nice to know how actually ends.
MeakoXIII chapter 17 . 4/3/2013
I really liked this story. I'm on to read Silver Millennium next, and I hope it answers my questions about Chibiusa and Helios. Great job!
Luna chapter 17 . 2/3/2013
This was amazing good! The plot line is interesting and unique, the characters are all well written, and the pacing well done. Some of the logic is a bit unusual, and some scenes could have been explained a bit more thoroughly (for example it's unclear if Chibiusa really did head for the gardens as Helios suggested), but this did not diminish from the adventure. If I were to complain it would be only that the sequel is not yet finished.
Callista Wolfwood chapter 17 . 1/2/2013
Wow that was one insane story but awesome nevertheless.
Vickysg1 chapter 16 . 10/11/2012
I've just finished reading this epic fic (I came through AO3, but then continued here, as I saw that it was complete) and let me tell you that it was great! I liked it very much, including the OCs you created.

I hope reposting it to AO3 will help you to write the sequel!
Hikari'sGato chapter 17 . 4/2/2012
Yes! this was so good, I can't wait to read the other one. I always thought about what would happen if the ruins on the moon were found and I'm so glad someone finally wrote a fic about it. Even though it went a different direction then I thought it would it was still really good. One question though, I completly forget but didn't Diana go with chibi-usa to the past, because she seems to have dissapered?
Echelon9 chapter 4 . 11/9/2011
I like this chapter. You're taking a much more sophisticated approach to the history of the Silver Millennium. I remember in the manga, after the defeat of Metalia, SM regenerated the entire palace on the moon to its former glory [even though it was strange that no one ever used it from there.]

I like the japanese to english conversations, though I'd say that if the Sailor Soldiers needed to go to America for whatever reason then SM could just as easily alter peoples memories to do so.
Echelon9 chapter 3 . 11/9/2011
This chapter reminds me of the plot from the SM special Lover of Princess Kaguya, except the guys having visions of what I assume to be the destruction of Silver Millennium. It is an interesting story so far.
Echelon9 chapter 2 . 11/8/2011
I'm liking the story, it is interesting. While I have read stories where humans have found the ruins of Silver Millennium on the moon, I have not read very many where the humans actually take an active role in trying to figure out what the ruins mean't.

Takeuchi was somewhat vague in describing the relationship between the humans and Queen Serenity's court following the destruction of SM and the creation of Crystal Tokyo. I wonder if she did that on purpose...

Does this story follow manga canon or anime canon?
Ari chapter 17 . 5/15/2011
Cant wait for more!
Dream's Abyss chapter 16 . 4/30/2011
It's probably a good thing I read this story now instead of when I was younger: I wouldn't have appreciated it nearly as much. It was very good!
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