|Reviews for Beautiful Day|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/24
An interresting look at a future that might have been.
Well written, but undeniably heartbreaking.
I really wanna see how everyone reacts to his death though.
My favorite part was definately the children, and Naruto's interactions with them. It all felt very real and natural, so kudos for keeping true to naruto's personality (unlike a certain canon epilogue) and for creating believable characters that felt liek real kids. Adorable.
| Milly Corn chapter 1 . 5/9
This made me cry... it's so well written and beautiful and just like Naruto... T_T T_T T_T T_T
| Otakugal chapter 1 . 3/18
omg im tearing up. jeez.
| Diana Rubes chapter 1 . 2/26
Please help me I'm crying. This was so beautiful. GREAT JOB
| Lenny mosca chapter 1 . 1/29
could you buy a sequel to this call a beautiful afternoon funeral after Math
| amaterasu.mugenjin chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
This was a very sad and very poignant story that I read every once in a while and it still gets to me.
| Outsider chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
I thought my lungs stopped working. My tear glands weren't working properly so they couldn't keep water from flowing out of my eyes. I was NOT crying. This has got to be one of my favorite one-shots of all time. I love the angst (though it didn't kill me inside too much) and my heart clenched rather painfully. Naruto deserves a good life after all he's been through but I can't help but feel that this would be an ending I would love to see again.
| FightsWithBears chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
I knew Naruto was gonna die
But I still went D:
| Tsuna97 chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
this is so sad! but so good! i really loved it! :D good job on this one!
| mutecebu chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
Oh wow, that was good-sad. I don't often see fics ending the story with "Naruto is still in love with Sakura, Sakura is still in love with Sasuke". Funny how that is.
| Deus Namikaze chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
Incredibly touching and sad. But it's wonderful none the less. It slightly reminds me of Gurren Lagann's ending. I've got tears in my eyes now…
| Reviewer chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
Ahhhh I'm flat out crying. That was freaking brilliant, okay? Freaking brilliant. Thank you.
| roger.j.yu chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Epic story, but maybe it should be labelled as Angst to warn viewers of unnecessary heartache. :'(
| bbarbie325 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
wow you just made me sob ridiculously hard ... good job
| loki0191 chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
An absolutely amazing fix. Had me in tears!