|Reviews for Seduce My Wife!|
| Akisan Sajid chapter 1 . 4/10
It's the biggest one-shot I've read yet. I laughed a lot. Sasuke is bastard as ever. Liked Naruto. The ending was good too. Nice story.
| EmiliaKyuchi chapter 1 . 2/13
Dear god, Sasuke has near expert levels in douchebaggery. I can sort of understand his reasoning but why did he have to go about it in such an asshole-ish way?! On the other hand though, if he hadn't been such a prick Sakura and Naruto wouldn't have gotten together. So that's something at least.
I did like the way you handled the progression of Sakura and Naruto's relationship though. It was very natural and believable. I also liked how you mixed in humor with the more serious parts. The way you kept everyone in character was nice too. All in all, fantastic job on this!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/10
The entire time...
I felt like I was reading a story with 20 chapters. xD
But then when I got to the end. I realized that this was all one piece!
IT FLOWED SO SMOOTH MA MANNNN.
| monica chapter 1 . 1/27
My name is Roland monica from Houston,taxes.i never believed in love spells or magic until i met this spell caster once. when i went to Africa in June 28th 2013 this year on a business summit. i ment a man called DR omoba. He is powerful he could help you cast a spells to bring back my love’s gone,misbehaving lover looking for some one to love you, bring back lost money and magic money spell or spell for a good job.i’m now happy & a living testimony cos the man i had wanted to marry left me 3 weeks before our wedding and my life was upside down cos our relationship has been on for 2 years… i really loved him, but his mother was against me and he had no good paying job. so when i met this spell caster, i told him what happened and explained the situation of things to him..at first i was undecided,skeptical and doubtful, but i just gave it a try. and in 6 days when i returned to taxes, my boyfriend (is now my husband ) he called me by himself and came to me apologizing that everything had been settled with his mom and family and he got a new job interview so we should get married..i didn’t believe it cos the spell caster only asked for my name and my boyfriends name and all i wanted him to do… well we are happily married now and we are expecting our little kid,and my husband also got a new job and our lives became much better. in case anyone needs the spell caster for some help, email address:
| johncahill chapter 1 . 1/26
I loved this story along with your other ones. Usually I have a strong dislike for humor and avoid reading them but this fan fiction made me laugh a ton. You balanced the drama with humor superbly. Thank you for this great story
| Kingofclubs8129 chapter 1 . 1/17
This was a fun fic. Im definitely favoriting this
| not logged in chapter 1 . 1/4
This was honestly one of the best fan fics I have ever read!
I was expecting some cheating smut filled story that I clicked on for curiosity, but it turned out to be one of the funniest most charming fics I have read! Such witty and funny lines, and the fact that while the topic is about Annulment/divorce of a marriage, there is a major lack of all the drama! If only some of the fics that had similar themes where this enjoyable!
| Jasesmiles chapter 1 . 1/4
LOVED IT! Thanks for this amazing story!
| Nostalgic Beauty chapter 1 . 1/2
I loved this. I think you struck a pretty neat valence between the seriousness and humor. Nice job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Omg! This was incredible! I loved the plot, the drama, the romance, the lil tinges of sex-intended humor! Good job! ;)
| emilio.johnson chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Hello friends,my name is EMILIO i want to give thanks to the great OZALOGBO who helped me allot in getting back my love and also helped me in my financial problem.i was in relationship with ANTHONIA both of us lived together in love and in happiness, suddenly she just work up one morning telling me that she is sick and tired of me i was so shocked and confused cause i never did anything wrong to her still i had to plead to her because i love her so much, but she still insisted to breakup with me, i tried all i could to get her back but it was not possible, after she left i was some how financially down i did not know what happened to my finance, so i decided to contact some spell casters which happens to be scams, i was frustrated then decided not to contact any spell caster again, one day i was watching a show when i saw a woman named TINA was giving testimony on how this great man named Dr OZALOGBO helped her in getting back her lover within 24 hours so that was how i decided to give a try and i contacted Dr OZALOGBO and told him about how she left me and my finance,the only thing he said was that i my lover will come back to me and my finance will come up again, that he is going to do all within 24 hours, so just decided to watch and see. in the next 24 hours which he said i got a call from her and she was pleading to me that she is very sorry for what she did to me, the most surprising thing was that the job i applied for in a company for almost 4 months, they just called and told me that i should come and start the work that am capable of doing the job, i was so surprised a tears of joy rolled down from my eyes,i was very very happy and she just came to my house and she started pleading to me, so i accepted her apology and now we are living happily together now, and am working in the company now am happy again. all thanks to Dr OZALOGBO for helping me and for making my dream to come through. for help and for appreciation you can contact Dr OZALOGBO through,
| purplemoneky chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
holy buckets! I loved it :) one of my favorites, you did a great job!
| chocovic-chu chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Yosh! Finally, Vic could read this story! Maa, even if the content was not as complicated as the title promising, yet Vic found it funnier than any seductive stories Vic ever read. The greatest of all, it was NaruSaku! Vic loved it simply because of that. So, otsukaresama & arigatou for sharing this story!
| blue sapphire la chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
I honestly have to say that I absolutely LOVE this fic. The humor you added in this story is spot on and many times I had to stop reading because I was laughing so hard. I rarely write reviews but I just had to after reading this awesome story :) if anything I wish the story was longer. I've been on a long hunt for good naruto/sakura stories and you totally satisfied my desire. LOVE LOVE LOVE the story! Lol alright I better stop babbling on and on
| GlassedGamer chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
I can't for the life of me remember where I found this. I believe someone had favorited it, and I just followed the crowd. When I first saw the title and the first few lines, I simply thought that it was yet another lemon-filled smut-story, and ended up bookmarking it for later.
Now, after about a month of partying with all the other enjoyable fanfics out there, ending up getting wasted and completely off the fucking rails, I found myself sitting alone in my home. Everyone else had gone home to their own places.
And so it were that I noticed a small bookmark, hidden underneath the pile of empty beer-bottles and lingering lingerie from the party-goers. In my loneliness, I embraced the bookmark and gave it a chance. A chance to prove itself to be something. Something more than the others. Someone I could trust and love, expecting it to give back in return.
Boy did it deliver!
I could barely hold back my laughter at the dialogue and comedy. I felt heart-warmed at the love shown. I cringed when the times were right. I loved it. Now the little bookmark hangs on my wall, just as you enter the front door. To show all who enters, that this is what to be expected of them. And to give a warm welcome to all guests- ...What the hell am I going on about? You should really stop me when I ramble on like this. Oh well, I enjoyed it immensely. If your other stories are even half as good, I'm so there!