|Reviews for Betrothed|
| Bronze chapter 1 . 1/28
Oh this was quite know, Ron always manages to make a fool of himself somehow. Short but sweet. And Harry is going to be busy for sometime to come with all his new wives.
| MSgt SilverDollar chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Fan-friggin-tastic one shot!
| Pathseekerme chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
I know I have said this too many times; I LOVED this! I could see everything taking place as if it were a movie-good writing!
| bobcox26 chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
I like it all except for Ginny,I just see her as a fangirl/stacker at best a little sister
| Araytigre chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Leave it to Hermione to think up schedules for practicing snogging with Harry, she'll probably schedule EVERY thing else too, she seems to Live for scheduling. But we love her just the same. I wonder if Lavender will stay with the group, or branch of with Ron? I Do Not see Ron as a part of the group even if Lavender stays, that just wouldn't be right in my eyes. Lots of fun in the future for Harry and his Ladies, be fun to see if Eros brings rings for all the other girls too. Thank You. TTFN
| Runecutter chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Oh it's certainly a great way to spend your birthday and it does make a nice little story.
But then i like the stories i read to be a little bit more slower timed and taking a lot more time and place for stuff like the mansion descriptions or between hearing that he has to become betrothed and actually going the step to do it... ;) It has therefore a lot of the qualities of a parody for me and i'm not sure if it really was meant in this "cracky" way...
| Slie Amos chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Very nice and cute. I have read a few cohort Harry stories and really like this one.
| serenityselena chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
an interesting and amusing plot _
| kelwin chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Another great fic. Is this going to be come more? Thanks!
| Stephanie O chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Another great story, but what's with the polygamy? This had a lot of really funny parts, and it was an enjoyable read. I really liked the metal box that contained the portkeys to each of Harry's houses - a very neat idea! I especially loved the idea of Eros, the God of Love, appearing as a phoenix; first with him mum's engagement ring, and then again with his parents' wedding rings...such a romantic idea! :) Thanks for writing! :)
| rb2312 chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
just read this after reading another of your stories
it is a fantastic story.
Pitty there are no additional chapters.
like the idea of Ron & Lavender, and that you kept the Nev/Hanna pairing
wonder what the goblins still need to tell Harry?
| Hakan Kurohi chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Moving a little fast there, aint ya? Other than that, very nice, i hope this particular story continues for a bit. In the mean time, i bid you adieu. Peaceful endings.
| xBloodSplatter chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Awesome story, I really enjoyed it. Seemed a little short though.
| WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
This was interesting. A great beginning that should be expanded on. I see a lot of room for both humour and romance.
| ARedHair chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
A nice light read.
Some issues were glossed over and wouldn't stand up in a more serious fic, but fit with the light hearted nature of this fic. Especially the way James setup the betrothals.
Although Harry was generally in denial about his relationship with Hermione I can quite see him immediately proposing when offered that as a way out off or diminishing the problem. Its in his character to act quickly and generally correctly in the heat of the moment.
Harry and Hermione seemed to resign themselves to the situation too quickly. I understand the panic and ranting stage ending quickly when Eros appeared and blessed their engagement, but I expected that to prompt them to make a serious effort to get Harry out of the betrothals. I know you explained that Hermione and the other girls had already examined the issue, but I just don't think Harry would drop his opposition that quickly or that they would both be accepting of a multiple marriage.
It seems to be a very lopsided situation with a divinely blessed marriage to the first wife. Probably best to end it where you did (it would take a really good plan to take it forward and would likely loose the light tone).
Overall, as a light hearted fanfic, an enjoyable read.