Reviews for Like No One's Looking
SuperSaraMoon chapter 1 . 7/30/2017
Ok, that chapter only lasted me a was so good, and cannot tell you how disappointed I am that THATS ALL THERE IS! Oh my god, this fic has so much potential that it blows my mind that you abandon it! You so clearly know where you want to take it! What would it take to get you writing again? I basically want to pay you to finish it, both this one and 180. How much would it take? You have hundreds of reviews from adoring fans, I feel a a go-fund-me account seems in order. I'm so hopeful that KH3 inspires you and rejuvenates your writing juices! What's Axel hiding!? How will he react to Riku's promise!? What happens after graduation!? How does Axel break Riku's heart!? Twice?! Is Demy's neighbor with the sexy ass Squall?! When does Riku meet Cid and start modeling for Seph? What's gonna happen with Saix? What about Irvine?! Ansem?! Girl, you are leaving us out to dry here! Also, you should really update these to the uncensored versionsor at least send it to me to read at supersaramoon at yahoo dot com. 3 me and the other reviews aren't lying you know. You truly are one of the best writers on here, and we love what you do. You are so amazing, and you write magic. Your work is far superior to a number of published books I've read, it would blow my mind if you aren't still writing. Please please please come back to this! You have ~it~!
SuperSaraMoon chapter 3 . 7/29/2017
Hey girl, hey! Look at me? Making 1 of your chapters last 6 whole days! I amaze myself with my willpower I really do. As always, an amazing chapter. I loved the whole section while they were at Larxyene's place (and the whole chapter, duhit felt really organic and believable, and the bedroom scene was done perfectly. I'm excited to hear about what Larx and Axel were talking about outside, and to see what Riku makes for Christmas! I never thought I would say this, but I think I might love this fic EVEN MORE than A Complete 180! You Nnneeeeedddd to get back to your fanfictions, girl! You are the queen of FF dot net! You truly are~
SuperSaraMoon chapter 2 . 7/23/2017
I really loved this chapter. You are doing such a great job. I have zero criticism for you, and so much praise. It breaks my heart that I only have 2 chapters left then nothingness. I honestly feel like a stalker reading all your fics, lol! I told my fiancé how I had started a new fix and was in love with it, and so emotionally invested because of 180, and how they were unfinished and what a damn shame it was. I never talk about what I'm reading with anybody, but this story made me excited and I wanted to share my excitement. BTW, it's my 27th birthday today! And I worked a 12 hr shift in the ED seeing patients (you know, being selfless and such), so if you decide you wanna follow the selfless theme and wanna publish a chapter for meeee... eh..? Eh..?...:D lol. I hope you're doing well and living a great life regardlessalso if you replied to a comment it would make my week! _
SuperSaraMoon chapter 1 . 7/22/2017
Oh my god, girl. This chapter was amazing. I'm so emotionally invested because of A Complete 180I am so in love right now. Jesus, you are so good at what you do. I feel all the emotions and subtleties you write; you know exactly how to make me experience your intentions. I am a marionette, and you pull my strings; Man am I impressed. 10/10
Guest chapter 4 . 8/17/2013
Have you abandoned this story? It's so good. :(
SoRikuR0x chapter 4 . 4/6/2013
Number 2: I can't believe you stopped here. IT'S KILLIN ME! :)
Number 3: Since ur website is down indefinitely, could you upload the uncensored version here? Or on livejournal or something? Please! I wanted to read all those smexy parts!
SavageNymph chapter 4 . 2/4/2012
Aw, I really loved this. Wish it would get updated, though I'd pull for an update on 180 or Stygian's sequel first. Never thought I'd like AxelxRiku but wow 3

I also just love all of Axel's Disney references xD
Kittryn chapter 4 . 11/8/2010
Still one of the best writers on here! Amazing Fanfiction. I was fan girl squeeing through the entire thing. I cant wait for an update! I didn't know you had made more ff since I last read your stuff. I shall have to get caught up! The things axel says is adorable. I love the analogies and metaphors. They are awesome.
becca670 chapter 4 . 10/17/2010
omg! lol after just reading 'a complete 180', this story ties it all together so well! i loved the insight of riku's history, and you dealed with everything so well.

also, i love the long chapters!

haha, im really enjoying this story, im really looking forward to the next chapter, so please keep writing!

thank you!
AiNeko-chan chapter 4 . 6/6/2010
Wow, this one is as good as 180! X'D

While in 180 Riku looks so agressive-so seme when he's with Sora, He's always on bottom here, and he looks so uke, so cute! 0/w/0d this is the first time I read AxelRiku, though. (I usually do prefer AkaRoku more) but with your great writing style, now I'm also in love with this pairing XDD

and, still, Rena is being a b*tch -_- and I wonder why Riku seems soo popular (among guys lol) here. Sure, he's handsome and cool and I really love him too, but- is he really that addicting? O_o

Anyway, I really am lookin forward for the next chappies! When will Riku become a model and meet Leon Cloud Seph etc? X) Coz I'm also curious about the other pairings, such as SephCloud and LeonRiku mwuahahahaha /shot/

and Axel, dont be mad at Riku coz of that promise plz! XD
Indifferently Different chapter 4 . 5/19/2010
I just love you. That's all.

I LOVE the way everyone reacted to Riku's changes,

and I love the way that he's becoming more and more of a sexual being.

I love the interactions between the people, a brush here, a lingering touch there. .

The way you write is so deeply erotic.

And I've been reading this story over and over for about 2 years as well.

Just saying :) 3
Paiara chapter 4 . 4/19/2010
So i've been rereading this chapter for over a year now. Are u going to update anytime soon? Please please please respond! Even if it's just to say you're quiting the story.
Riku's-Way-to-the-Dawn chapter 4 . 3/4/2010
This is probably the best prequel I've ever read. I loved the very subtle Disney hints like Jack Skellington logos and one of the last lines, "Don't tell me the sea witch has your voice again..." (hehe little mermaid)

Lol at the Vexen thing. And you know what's weird? Every time I read Saix's lines I hear the voice of Severus Snap from the Harry Potter series. I'm just dorky like that I guess.

I never would've thought of two of my favorite KH characters together like this but you've made me a huge fan. So thanks for corrupting me. :D
Sanjix chapter 4 . 11/18/2009
I think I like this one better than A Complete 180, which I wasn't expecting. (I read the one on your site, btw) Again, well-written and few errors in this one. I really liked the parallels between the two fics, like the pictures of Riku and the stories behind them. Looking forward to the next chapter!
HentaiHanyou chapter 4 . 8/30/2009
I love you. I love you I love you I love you.

I became hooked by 180 and I HAD to read this. I love how you write Riku and Axel! It's too cute and so easy to imagine. I actually went to your site to read this and then came back here to review. This story is so great and I can't wait til you update!
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