Reviews for Winter Wonderland
Emskie Potter chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
This is cute!
wombat blainers chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
that is soo cute! -
rikkurox chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Well I love romance in stories so I think this is great!
Waddiwasi77 chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
aw that was so cute!
little old me hee hee chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
aw so cute!

I just want to say my name in Mariah and I think it's cool that that's your muse's name too (even though it's spelled differently).

Great job with this story, and keep writing!
scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
aw that's so sweet! great job writing the story
ToMakeMeTame chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
WHOO-HOO! james and lily, sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g! lol. another great story, as always. well, i gtg. ttyl. bye!

ballerinadoll9 chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
very cute
Lillian Vianne chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
Aw that was so cute and I liked it lots and I think you should add more to it!
catalyst chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
it's cute, but the characterization is a little off.. ? James wouldn't just go and reveal he's an animagus, especially if they weren't even a couple yet, that'd be risking one of his best mate's biggest secrets, plus it's illegal. And you'd think Lily would have a bigger reaction.
Deandra chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
That was sweet, but there is one minor detail you overlooked - Lily is running around outside in the dead of winter wearing nothing but her bathrobe and slippers (presumably a nightgown/pajamas under the robe). Probably you ought to have her get fully dressed in the first paragraph. Then we can assume she put on a cloak, but is at least dressed to be running around in public.

- Deandra
Fayth G chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
So good! I loved it! Great short story, I wouldn't add any more. :)
Bookworm622 chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
Aww, that is so sweet! I wish I had a bpyfriend that sweet!

kscadden chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
aw thats sweet