Reviews for Firsts
Themonkey chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
lol... Nice A/N... Good story.
Zeke-Scarlet chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
YAY! Touya, you're awesome and I want you to try your hardest to actually write more than one-shots! Jeez... I'VE actually written more than you and your like five years older than me. COME ON!

Zac Scarlet
az chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
hiya great story, but i couldnt get the middle bit by typing

books. ?no6093677

into the url bar, any explanation?

fox-siren chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
im sad u killed her off.. but it was great either way! it was nice and long too! great work! u should make more!
zoey chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
it was very good. interestingly ended and with alot of drama. but when Murtagh was kissing Eragon before they were at the varden, where did Saphira go?

love to here your reply,

Chasyn chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Awe! It was cute! *pulls out little Eragon and Murtagh plushies and squishes them together*

I actually just started Eragon. XD I've seen the movie and am half way through the book.
xxnecromancerxx chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
loved it. do more. murtaghsexy really should read eldest
Kalinovskaja chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
Very nice... -

I loved it from the beginning till the end... hehe, don't feel shy to write more XD

Take care!
TheUndertone chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
HOLY FREAKING CRAP! *hugs the story*!
Tsurai Shi chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
I love this story SO much! It's going straight to my favorites. You charatcerized them both really well, and I loved how you did the lemon scene! :D

Hoping you write more Murtagh/Eragon sometime! _

Argento Lobo chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
3 are a lot of reviews... so I'l leave my humble opinion and see what happens.

I liked it. Scratch that.. I LOVED IT!

Murtagh and Eragon belong together.

I don't dislike Arya... but she's a frigid bitch... (in eldest she proves it)

Good Work!
sunshee chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
HOHOHOHO~~ GOD . I love you.!
SoubixLoveless chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
You know, I was so confused when you switched fomr hot yaoi, to some thing.

I don't even know what the fuck you were talking about, lol.

I was all "Huh..."

And how is Angela?

I dunno her!

Do I?

Oh well.

I have to read the book...

Keep your brother at your side... o, keep your brother in your bed, o, keep... well you know the rest!


I love your yaoi
Sora-Morikawa chapter 1 . 1/12/2007

XD *happy* this is my first Dead!Arya fic

Poor Arya, but I loved the hot scene between Eragon and Murtagh!


ff-kh-luvrgrl chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
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