Reviews for A Few Clumps of Earth
Mattie chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
I don't know if you still use this account or write since it's been years since this was posted, but I just needed to say that this an amazing fic. It's beautifully written and it's moving and the best fic in the NCIS fandom.

I'm so disappointed that there are so many awful fics that get dozens of reviews when there are beautiful fics like yours that get so few.

Anyway, just wanted to say thank you for sharing.
Quinndolynn chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Okay I lied. Oh, Abby. I love Abby wanting to be an agent, and Gibbs feeling so sorry for her after she's killed Ari. Again, this is how AU should go. And now I really will stop.
Zurk chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Aw... you made me cry. Shame on you. Beautifully done.

Arwen chapter 1 . 2/9/2007

At first, I wasn't quite sure about it. But I figured it out quickly, and I really like the way it's written. I like the thought of how everything could have been different if you chose something different. However, it took me some time to figure out where the breaks between paragraphs were. Maybe you could do something else. Other than that, please continue writing.
Angie chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
these are BEAUTIFUL! favorites are 4 ~agent abby!~ and 5. i neveer would have thought it.