Reviews for Inside My Mind
eriksredrose chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
very well written
P'tfami chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
You're right. It is terrible, but since it was your first effort its more to be pitied than censured.

The redeeming qualities of the poem lie in your descriptions which are very vivid in details.

And (mercifully) you have refrained from making this another "I love Erik" poem, so overall the poem rises in my estimation.
Luckii.jinx chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
Short, Simple, sweet.
MusicOfTheNight11 chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
Wow. I just read that over and over about twenty times. Wow. That is so purely beautiful and deep, it's astounding. Wow...
Helden chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
Funny, I usually don't like poetry, even though the first thing I posted (and promptly took down after looking at it again) was a collection of cinquains: a form of poetry. Short it may be, but descriptive it is.


Caroline Butler