|Reviews for Indiana Elric?|
| AnimeJewel246 chapter 21 . 7/24/2020
THIS WAS AMAZING. Now, I'm a bit sad because its highly unlikely this will be continued after so long, but I'm hoping anyway! The humor in this story was terrific. The characterization was wonderful. The angst was enjoyable. Every part of this story had me on the edge of my seat, and it truly fit the adventurous humor-type story. It was realistic, quirky, and very clever.
This story is certainly one of your best. It's extremely well written, and I really hope you'll be able to write more stories like this in the future!
You're an amazing writer, and you deserve much praise for your work!
| Gwntan12 chapter 21 . 1/29/2016
What the- A grenade launcher?! Where'd Hohenheim get THAT from?!
| Senju Serena chapter 4 . 4/6/2015
Wow. I commend you on this chapter. I was worried before that their personalities wouldn't carry over, but this worked really well with the plot.
| Lilac Gemini chapter 21 . 7/10/2014
Ooh, I want a grenade launcher! And please update soon, I like this story a lot and hope this next chapter won't take as long as the others!
| Lilac Gemini chapter 4 . 7/9/2014
Ahh, Ed was right. This may be half-serious crack and half-serious crack only, but it is utterly PERFECT half-serious crack. Keep that in mind.
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/18/2014
i like the ed and al relationship:)
| jessica chapter 21 . 2/16/2014
I have to say I really love your story. It's so beautifully written and great well thought out plot. I know you haven't updated in years and you probably won't even read this, but if you do I just wanted to say how awesome your story is. I really enjoyed reading it. And it would be really great if you added more chapters, or did another story based off the first anime, because your writing is really great and creative and I'd love to see more. I've also read your other stories and they're good as well.
| Leocht chapter 20 . 5/10/2013
I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update!
| Tatokat chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
The "weather toilet bowl of the world"? Come on the weather here is not THAT bad. XD
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/21/2013
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
I love your story! Totally awesome, and a brilliant inspiration for my own creative writing. Please do keep writing.
| Do a Barrel Roll chapter 21 . 3/2/2012
Hohenheim...with a grenade launcher? Awesomeness!
Are you going to continue this? It's too epic to be discontinued!
| Skydive Off Isengard chapter 4 . 8/20/2011
I am deeply engrossed in this, but I needed to stop just to say that I'm so glad you kept the 'tapestries' scene in! XD (Plus the Scottish accent, of course.) Ok, I'll be back. *eager to resume reading*
| I31011 chapter 21 . 7/19/2011
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OHMYGOSH that was truly fantabulous!
I swear this is pure epicness, and I have no specific reason either.I read chapter 1-21 in a matter of hours and I just kinda figured that it was...well...I dunno...epic? anyway this is awesome so I hope you update soon!
| LiLiKun18 chapter 21 . 12/27/2010
So very very very good! Please update soon! I need to know what happens