|Reviews for Beezleboss|
| A Loving Fist chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Good chapter! You used a lot of formal internal dialog which I think really suits Yuna. Also it's a good idea, and the mention of the fayth at the end, too. I'm curious to see where Tidus comes in, are you continuing this? Good story! It will be interesting to see where this goes. :)
| thepiratejilt chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Huh. This is unlike anything I've read here before! I like it very much! :D
SOry abour the lack of reviews. Seems that this section is really losing a lot of it's fans. [ I hope you still plan to continue?
| Koneko chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
I liked the chapter even though it was a tad bit hard for me to read. The things your characters were saying were embedded into the paragraphs and it was hard for me to know where Paine stopped talking and Yuna began.
Even though it's a bit hard to imagine Rikku (if that's her) as the devil I still like it. Don't forget to update this!