Reviews for A Wish Come True
Mistress Hinata chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
This is a very nice story and that's good that Hinata finally got her wish. :)
jessica-semnadaprafaze123 chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
HJSFDWDGÇA SLFJAÇLAS
DEAD! omg i love lemons, cute lemons? pff i love more.
awesome.
tk04 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
What can I say? the story did bring a smile on my face. :)

Thank you!
CynthiAngel chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
LOVED it.

amazing. aw!
math music reading chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
That was simply amazing, I love your SasuHina fics. I hope you someday complete the ones on hiatus and that you write more. Your work seriously keeps me riveted, I couldn't possibly take anymore reading pleasure.
SarahiNia chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Cute but 0.o...for the lemons...Havent read to many of them even if it was small im bearly 14 ppl! VIRGIN EYES PPL..oh well loved it cute and fluffy!
Haruka2007 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
v smexy ;)

great oneshot :)

well written :D
crazysmile15 chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! In the ever internal words of Lee; THE FLOWER OF THERE YOUTH GLISTENS! LOL!
john chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Dont worry about the content. Theres definetely worse on this sight.
Tw33ty JR chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
that was good
eileen chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
that was a very lovely reunion, it's nice to see an HinaSasu lemon, good work!
Sandungera chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
i like this story, also I LOVE THIS SONG! I danced it in jazz.
goolsbygirl chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
aww how cute love this one keep it up
Lycan180 chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
nice. But one question: why was she crying the entire time?
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
Eh, your smut seems a little flowerly in places. I don't care for the phrase "honey-soaked" or the "pale amethyst" metaphor, and I'd argue that his tongue wouldn't be able to reach that far.

Eh, I like the idea of the fic, and her emotions are shown well.
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