Reviews for Dinner and a Song
Mama chapter 13 . 5/12/2007
They loved each other...So kawai! Please update soon!
Adelaide MacGregor chapter 12 . 4/28/2007
Spelling and grammar need extreme work, but you are moving the story along well.
Adelaide MacGregor chapter 11 . 4/24/2007
A good chapter with your idea and where you took the story, but the grammar in this chapter needs A LOT of work. Sentence structure mostly. Read through it and you'll find most of the mistakes I believe. Good luck!
Hououza chapter 12 . 4/22/2007
Excellent chapter.

Interesting how their dreams were conflicting messages, Tomoyo's seemingly reassuring her of his feelings while his making him afraid of losing her. I can't only wonder what will happen, and what he will do once he recovers from this sickness that seems to have for the moment sprung up on him.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
Musette Fujiwara chapter 12 . 4/22/2007
wow...

I'm speechless. I loved the chapter, the dreams were so significative, like they have double meaning, while Tomoyo had a plesant dream he had a nightmare a really scary one. To worse things he come down with an illness.

Now will he be able to go to the play due to being sick...

I can't wait till the next one...
asga chapter 12 . 4/20/2007
Yuo its a good chapter :D Update please :D
soabdso chapter 12 . 4/20/2007
I think that Eriol has insomnia or something like that; you've also made many spelling mistakes.

Anyway, cute chpater and update soon!
Mama chapter 12 . 4/20/2007
No Eriol Tomoyo loves you!Please update soon I really liked it!
Musette Fujiwara chapter 11 . 4/14/2007
Look... I finally had the time to read and review your new fic. Hope you ain't upset...

I loved it, how a simply country girl grab the attention of a city boy. To manage to make him restless until he can be in her presence.

I love how it isn't the same old, same old, of the friendship already form. it resembles to the real life.

I loved it. Can't wait to read your next chapter...
Lady kHOLIC chapter 11 . 4/4/2007
Cute chapter. is it just me? or i have a feeling something bad might happen.. LOOL maybe im just paranoid?

Looking forward to your Next update :]

xoxo,

AsianGlitter
oohhcottoncandy chapter 11 . 4/4/2007
great job wit the story! I really enjoyed reading this, but i think i would have liked it more if there were less run-on sentences.
soabdso chapter 11 . 4/4/2007
Nice; you tend to use a lot of "he looked to her" instead of "he looked at her".

Anyway, update soon!
sakatrina90 chapter 11 . 4/4/2007
Wow! i must say ilike this chapter very much! I have a question, when this chapter was comming to an end is tomoyo still doubting eriol's intention? I mean he did want to show her that he was sincere but did tomoyo see it? Please update as soon as possible! Thanks!
BlueMeteorGirl chapter 11 . 4/3/2007
awhow cute D
Hououza chapter 11 . 4/3/2007
Excellent chapter.

Glad to see them enjoying themselves, it seems that they had a good time together. Hopefully their friends will come to support them in time.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
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