|Reviews for a hard walk's end|
| The Original Jag Lady chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
Your English is excellent. The only thing: If you could develop the story more with Calleigh and John Hagens. That would be refreshing to see those two paired.
| csimiamifreako chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
YEAH! VERY GOOD, I LIKE THE WAY IT WAS SORTA HER THOUGHTS UP TO HER CONFRONTATION!
DID I LIKE IT, YES!