|Reviews for Hollow|
| The Lighthouse's Keeper chapter 6 . 7/18/2013
"Chew on that, Winchesters."
I LOVE IT I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING OH MY CAS
| mysticmoon1331 chapter 6 . 10/8/2012
| laily.spenstar chapter 6 . 3/18/2012
Another normal life story for the boys!I absolutely love the new family,Jo and Luke together(when did they get married?), and also those cute kids.I'm glad you get Bobby to check up on Sam and story is a little bit short, but I still love it!
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/18/2011
yay! Tall Tales lol I LOVE that episode..one of my absolute favorites :)
gasp! Bobby showed up! :D
"The lights on the top of the cab should have clued him in, but you never seemed to know these days what yahoos had decided they needed flashing lights to add some sense of importance to their humdrum lives."
lol! sadly enough that's kinda true lol
"I bet you've got some good stories, then,"
lol that would be so awesome to hear stories from Bobby about Sam and Dean..ya know, if Bobby weren't a fictional character :( lol
"..of the time Sam had wet his pants because he'd thought the shower curtain was a ghost.."
bahahaha! that's too funny! lol
the part about there being a loud crash in the kitchen and then the "we got it!"...oh geeze...that cracked me up!
oh noes! I forgot that this was the last chapter and I was quite sad when I saw "end" :(
but I guess it's on to the next story! :D lol
great job! I love this 'verse and the characters and how you write it...and just...everything! lol this needs to be like a movie or somethin..that would rock! Lol
| x.lizzy.x chapter 5 . 4/17/2011
"..and Jo saw the flash of a tear fall before Dean raised a hand to his face, brushing at the wetness, drawing things back into himself."
-sniffles- it's always so sad when Dean cries :(
wow..I like the way that Luke and Jo comforted Dean with the whole "if you can't save him, kill him" thing...good job on that :)
awww! that was a really good chapter! -sniffles-
| x.lizzy.x chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
"There was a squeak of protest from Tommy as he was collared – literally – by his uncle."
I can totally imagine that and I love that you used the word "squeak"! lol
"Sweetheart, please don't gesture with your silverware,"
lol I love pointing at people with whatever utensil I'm using to eat with lol
awww :( poor Sammy...so broken :(
good job on the chapter! :)
| x.lizzy.x chapter 3 . 4/17/2011
yay! I'm back again lol
"The tone of Sam's reply carried clearly across the airwaves, and if she didn't get the exact words, the emotion was clear. Pissed. Off."
lol that made me laugh and it made me picture Sam's "bitchface" which also made me laugh lol
awww :( Sam's not okay :( that's heartbreaking...
good job! can't wait to read more! I'm gonna be so sad after I finish reading all of the stories in this 'verse..which at the rate I'm goin shouldn't be long...lol and sorry if you get like 12,000 notifications of reviews lol I know how much I like reviews and I make sure to review to the good writers :)
| x.lizzy.x chapter 2 . 4/17/2011
lol I feel that way about my phone sometimes too..just wanna shut it off so people will leave me alone...but I don't like the fact that that's the only way to get a hold of me, so I rarely ever shut my phone off lol
11 missed calls? 9 voicemails? holy crap!
"And damn Jo for her soft concern and the safe haven she offered."
yeah! damn her for caring and stuff! lol
"Trying to keep myself from smothering you in your sleep, you freakin' chick."
lol I love the While You Were Sleeping convo...and the movie too...gotta love Sandra Bullock :)
good job! :) I wanna stay up and read more but it's like 5:30am lol thank God I don't have to work or anything..."couldn't stop reading a fanfic" isn't really an actual excuse for calling into work lol
I'll be back soon to read more though :)
| jenny.lynne chapter 5 . 12/19/2010
Chapter 5 is my favorite chapter in Hollow. The weight of what John told Dean he might have to do to Sam...this has always bothered me. However, I love your insight, what Jo and Luke tell Dean about why John probably did and said the things he did. You've put into clearer words an intangible theory that's been somewhere inside my head. It's always been Sammy's soul that Dean's been supposed to be protecting.
I love the way you interweave the Sweeds with the canon.
| Tangled in the Supernatural chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Oh, you suck! Do you know how hard it is to read through tears? Hard! And blurry. Very well written. *sniffle*
| Death-Muncher chapter 6 . 11/11/2009
love it 3 :D
| ziggy.uk chapter 6 . 9/18/2009
Another awesome story in this great series. Loved how you took the emotional issues in the epis and worked them into the story with Jo and Luke giving the boys the emotional support they so desperately needed, not only with their presence but with their phone conversations too. Great too that you brought Bobby into this fic, he is such a part of the boys lives that couldn't be ignored.
Again great writing, so in character, loved it.
| dark-angels-who-eat-cookies chapter 3 . 9/15/2009
Aw, the end of this chapter made me cry (in a good way).
Ava being taken didn't really affect me when I saw it, but having someone there for the boys to talk to gives this such an emotional rawness. It's like, even though I know what has happened, it's new, and it's powerful stuff. I love it :)
Love (and tear-drying) Dawec
| elderwitty chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
First of all, it's the first! I'm totally a responsible adult. Hey! Why are you laughing?
I love these vignettes. They mesh so well with the eps. I only wish that canon Sam and Dean had the emotional support system that your Swedes provide.
She paused. “If that makes any sense at all.”
Love that your characters talk like real people, with sometimes casual sytax and sentence structure. Just like us. And
“May have had something of a setback,” the older man admitted.
Dry. That boy is D.R.Y. I'm sick and have had a headache all day, but these lines still made me laugh. Hard. That's good stuff.
Tommy's phone message, straight from his brain and unfiltered, for our enjoyment.
Michael had started to laugh and the other boy’s slightly breathless delivery told Dean that he was probably fighting off his younger brother.
I'm picturing it right now - Michael with his palm on Tommy's forehead, while Tommy pinwheels his arms in an effort to get the phone (and Michael) back.
I've said it before, but I love the way your 'verse is ordinary. Not amped up and high wire tension because that's all we have time to show in the 44 minute TV hour, but is instead, easy...just moving along with their day, doing something usual like picking up fast food lunch when worry finds them on a phone line. The gentle reality grounds the more esoteric stuff from canon.
“Sam. It’s Luke. Call you brother.”
I think fanfic ate your 'r'. Bad fanfic site.
Again, just what the boys need: a place to recover, a Jo to lean on, and a Luke to straighten out muddled thinking.
“Sweetheart, please don’t gesture with your silverware,”
I don't know just why this tickles me so much, but it really, really does.
So much angst, handled so beautifully. And Jo, with her ninja caring/comforting skills, taking care of Dean the only way he'll allow. And then giving him the much more palatable (to him) thought that John did what he did for them both. Which we all knew, so, "Oh, Dean."
Miss Maddie for the win!
Luke's wish for the boys' good name. It's all well and good to tell yourself that you don't care what the world thinks about you, but you know it's out there and it has to weigh on you. Having confirmation that people who matter know the truth can only be good.
Bobby on a mission. Stealth Bobby. Bobby bonding with Jo. *insert squee here* All the tiny details that make it plain that Sam and Dean aren't just here a lot, they're _at home_ here. Perfect. Bobby and Luke sniffin' and circling and raising hackles, then joining forces. Hee.
Didn’t have the right to expect them to keep him appraised
Fanfic still has your 'r', but gave you a bonus 'a' in apprised. So that's something, anyway.
Another excellent job.
| vonnie836 chapter 6 . 9/12/2008
So I got through another one. And it was another good one. Loved how the boys are growing closer to Jo and Luke, how they are trusting them and receive the help they need. Loved how you brought Bobby into this. I really like the old guy. He is one of my favorites. Anyway, this is really good and I have to make myself stop for today. I really need to go to bed now. Hugs, Vonnie