Reviews for Planning with Alice
bloom00011 chapter 2 . 9/24/2008
im really enjoying your story, but i have a question..

if your not from english speaking countries where are you from?

if its to personal a question can you tell me what language you speek first?

just wontering, by the way your english is really good.
meghanthemomo chapter 2 . 5/18/2008
i loved it plz write a sequel
Kiyamasho chapter 2 . 1/11/2007
LOL it was funny although the four of them were slightly out of character.
GoodyGoody23 chapter 2 . 1/10/2007
I don't think it was forced at all. Perfect, actually. I loved it. You're a great writer.
f danielle chapter 2 . 1/9/2007
Poor Jasper. Hehe.
1stepbehind29 chapter 2 . 1/9/2007
hehe. very nice. but still, it would have been cool to make this a story...

and u could make this chapter as a new year's present...
Asquared91 chapter 2 . 1/9/2007
Haha. That was funny. Poor Alice and Bella. I would have thought it was a real proposal if I were them.

eclispeblackrose1901 chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
it was hilarous! You have to write another chapter! Please?
alexlovemetal chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
Hilarious! I love it! Poor Edward! Alice and Jasper are really mean!

Greetings from Spain
1stepbehind29 chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
hahahaha. love it!

update soon!
Madison chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
haha this is hilarious, keep going!
Amiiix3 chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Haha. I love the end! Good story keep writing! ]
Firethorn12 chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
HEHEHEHE! THat was very funny! I0ved it! m0re please!
MuslimBarbie chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
HAHA! Amazing!
Asquared91 chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Hahaha. Poor Edward.

I love how Jasper came up with the idea. Haha.

Any chance of another chapter? Like what happens when Bella discovers the bags went missing?

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