Reviews for Waiting for Snow
AJeff chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Bittersweet...beautifully written. Bravo!
can-can-can chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
Very bittersweet... And the metaphors painted the picture so well. I really liked it!
wjobsessed chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
Boy that was beautifully bittersweet!

I can relate to the metaphor-it is post-Christmas and not even one little snowflake in New England*sigh*
Eireish chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
Amazing. Melancholy and hopeful. I love how you created them both so well in this fiction.
Toplesslemon chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
Great fic! I really enjoyed it. :D
2kool4skool chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
That was a little depressing but very beautiful. I love your use of description. It reminds me of back in highschool in a creative writing course, when I wrote a story about snow. It was a rather dark piece about dead leaves and barren branches being blanketed in lies. I had forgotten about that. I like this story, I can relate to Jordan's mood. Thanks for another awesome update. I love when you clean out your hard drive!
cjds chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
Wow, intense, sad and a fleeting glimmer of hope wow!
pryrmtns chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
wow... very profound... and yes snow (as I'm looking out the window) does cover the ugliness for awhile...
jmkw chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
Wow. I REALLY like this. You were busy on your train trips!