|Reviews for The Best Laid Plans|
| Smiling Seshat chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
This is good, but there a some typos and too-long paragraphs that should be taken care of.
Otherwise, cool story. :)
| Freidon chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
Cool beans. ~sniffs~ Dumbly ol' Dumbledore came back. It's good to see a story that doesn't over love him, nor over hate him. Keep up the good work.
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
Very nice insight into what Dumbledore was thinking. His plans made sense, but they left to much to chance and he didn't have back ups in case something went wrong for some!
| Book junkie from beyond chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
only a few things i could find wrong with it. 1. you cant apparate on Hogwarts grounds. 2. Snape killed Dumbledore because he was under an unbreakable oath. God i cant wait for the last book! I personally think that *fingers crossed* Sirius is alive (He was pushed into an unknown portal) but Dumbedore is dead. Still it a good fanfic
| TheShyMonster chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
i was distraught when dumbledore i just sat there cryingin my room for ages
| potato-head4 chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
the best-laid plans of mice and men?...it's a little hard to read becasue of the big paragraph chunks. A little easier spacing would be appreciated