wow that was great you got the characters down the story idea was cool and i love how you made c.c react your good i take it you watch a lot of the nanny lol i do to

awwww this is soo sad but i luved it.. it was soo sweet so heart warming

you shud do more :D

that was awesome. it should so be a real episode. i loved it. make more

This story is amazing.

Oh I adore this story! Going on my faves list. This played out like an episode for real. I could just imagine everything happening as you wrote it. I Love it! Do you think you could write a follow up to this story? That would be amazing! Love it!

I love this story! I like Fran's reason for saying that and making him promise. It's so sweet, but so sad.

Great job! Keep up the good work!

that was soo sweet!

great story!

This was one of the greatest short stories I have read in a long time. Good job on writting it. It's very hard to write about death and you did a marvelous job.