|Reviews for His Bitter Sweet End|
| machievelli chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Posted 4 November 2012, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. I was posting directly to the actual story threads, but my computer went down again in June of 2012 with a virus. Then in late November kotorfanmedia went down for reasons unknown, so I was stymied in my attempts to post the reviews. I had waited for it to revive, but you on deserve your reviews.
KOTOR on Star Forge: Carth has to make one more try to save her
Remember conversation breaks. The only reason I was able to follow the thread of the conversation was because you broke it after each paired comment.
The story is a pretty but sad way for the saga to end. As the dark lord she cannot be bothered by love ever again.
| SwEeT-rEgArDs chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
omg! girl that was powerful! wow so sad...so sad no wonder you called this his bitter sweet end. man that was sad
| HandMeThatCookie chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
Wow, I almost cried there, lol. It was great. Write more DSRevanCarth! Interesting concept, but i love how u write it out!