|Reviews for Mirage|
| 2mrklr chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Wow! So good. You have captured Dark Mal very well. But now I really want to know what happens next. Which way does he go? Will his Christian roots win out in the end? Which way do you see it?
| luvagoo chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Wow. I loved this.
| Enfleurage chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
Both compelling and disturbing and very much writing that I couldn't tear my eyes from.
That was a powerful, powerful story.
| ArtemisPrime chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
A fantastic character study of a man who has lost everything. He's completely alone, feeling guilty for it and can only find a hint of solace in torturing Saffron.
Each of your characters were true to form and I could hear each one's voice as I read. I chuckled over Jayne's reaction - so Jayne! It would be interesting to read another chapter where River comes into play. I understand that you left the ending a little vague, but I do think that Mal hasn't completely lost it and wouldn't shoot Saffron.
This is a very well-written story and I enjoyed it tremendously.