I like the story so far but IM kinda wondering who the mother is is it still kushina or a different person

Too much OC. I can't read more

Besides, I think you have too many original characters. It is unnecessary to have so many adopted daughters. And if you read the Boruto later, you'll be more aware that Hokage isn't like a king, and that Hokage's son isn't like a prince, called Sama by everyone, or served by a group of maid-like girls

It's an interesting story in general, but there's a lot of confusion. First I assume that your novel was written before Naruto's parents' names and identities were published. Secondly, a ninja could not have been hurt so much in the earthquake, even if he was just a gennin, not to mention the Hokage. Nor should Arashi( Minato) be so flirtatious with Mikoto. The Japanese are not as open as Europeans and Americans , and there are no kisses or verbal flirtations unless they are lovers or parents and children. Moreover, Naruto seems a stupid big mouth often. Most important,I don't understand why, as Hokage, Arashi just so easily gave up trying to get Naruto a trial, so easily killed his own son? I think it's ridiculous. He should at least stall for time. Naruto shouldn't so easy to give up his life, specially he knew this would hurt his families badly. So this is really dramatic and illogical. Finally, you give up before Naruto confesses.

Your answers no one asked shouldn't be spoilers...I'll stop reading them

...huh no direct confrontation with the spy?

so the spy moves out like that? No mentions about the other naruto?

Your answers no one asked shouldn't be spoilers...I'll stop reading them

...huh no direct confrontation with the spy?

so the spy moves out like that? No mentions about the other naruto?

...wondering if I should go back and review. on the prev chapters...nvm

damn, i want that hair

So... I'm going to assume this was written before Naruto's parents' names (Minato and Kushina) were revealed? Either that or this is a completely different AU in which Naruto's father is still the Fourth Hokage but someone else

Don't you mean bijuudama?

Oh shit I just realized, his dad is named Arashi Uzumaki here and not Minato Namikaze lmao

If Naruto cane out and said my name is Naruto Uzumaki instead of Naruto Namikaze, he would've been so fked if that was the case XD