Reviews for Door Number Two
Guest chapter 1 . 2/29
Too much OC. I can't read more
Guest chapter 47 . 7/10/2023
Besides, I think you have too many original characters. It is unnecessary to have so many adopted daughters. And if you read the Boruto later, you'll be more aware that Hokage isn't like a king, and that Hokage's son isn't like a prince, called Sama by everyone, or served by a group of maid-like girls
Guest chapter 47 . 7/10/2023
It's an interesting story in general, but there's a lot of confusion. First I assume that your novel was written before Naruto's parents' names and identities were published. Secondly, a ninja could not have been hurt so much in the earthquake, even if he was just a gennin, not to mention the Hokage. Nor should Arashi( Minato) be so flirtatious with Mikoto. The Japanese are not as open as Europeans and Americans , and there are no kisses or verbal flirtations unless they are lovers or parents and children. Moreover, Naruto seems a stupid big mouth often. Most important,I don't understand why, as Hokage, Arashi just so easily gave up trying to get Naruto a trial, so easily killed his own son? I think it's ridiculous. He should at least stall for time. Naruto shouldn't so easy to give up his life, specially he knew this would hurt his families badly. So this is really dramatic and illogical. Finally, you give up before Naruto confesses.
realfan16 chapter 10 . 6/1/2022
Your answers no one asked shouldn't be spoilers...I'll stop reading them
realfan16 chapter 6 . 6/1/2022
...huh no direct confrontation with the spy?
realfan16 chapter 7 . 6/1/2022
so the spy moves out like that? No mentions about the other naruto?
realfan16 chapter 10 . 6/1/2022
Your answers no one asked shouldn't be spoilers...I'll stop reading them
realfan16 chapter 6 . 6/1/2022
...huh no direct confrontation with the spy?
realfan16 chapter 7 . 6/1/2022
so the spy moves out like that? No mentions about the other naruto?
realfan16 chapter 5 . 5/31/2022
...wondering if I should go back and review. on the prev chapters...nvm
MyLifeIsUtterShit chapter 7 . 3/20/2022
damn, i want that hair
Hayoen chapter 1 . 4/26/2020
So... I'm going to assume this was written before Naruto's parents' names (Minato and Kushina) were revealed? Either that or this is a completely different AU in which Naruto's father is still the Fourth Hokage but someone else
huongdaoroma chapter 46 . 3/3/2020
Don't you mean bijuudama?
huongdaoroma chapter 28 . 3/3/2020
Oh shit I just realized, his dad is named Arashi Uzumaki here and not Minato Namikaze lmao

If Naruto cane out and said my name is Naruto Uzumaki instead of Naruto Namikaze, he would've been so fked if that was the case XD
Guest chapter 14 . 3/1/2020
I love your little references XDD
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