|Reviews for Treatment: Eureka Maru|
| michelle chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
I really enjoyed your story, I liked the reason why Harper was the captain
| krashkart chapter 10 . 1/10/2007
Past crew meeting future crew stories are always fun. You've got the basics of a good story here but you need to flesh it out. I understand why you wrote this the way you did, school assignments are important, but now that you've received your grade why don't you rework it as prose fan fiction.
| Natta chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
The way you describe things is certainly original, but it makes it very hard to read. I would like to read this story, but the way you write it out as a movie makes it really confusing.
| Benesound chapter 10 . 1/2/2007
"but you could’ve at least made me taller!”
:D I loved that line! :)
| krashkart chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
Interesting concept and you are quite good at descriptive prose when describing the scenes, but I am finding it hard to get into your world. The presentation doesn't lend itself well to immersion into the story.