Reviews for Treatment: Eureka Maru
michelle chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
I really enjoyed your story, I liked the reason why Harper was the captain
krashkart chapter 10 . 1/10/2007
Past crew meeting future crew stories are always fun. You've got the basics of a good story here but you need to flesh it out. I understand why you wrote this the way you did, school assignments are important, but now that you've received your grade why don't you rework it as prose fan fiction.
Natta chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
The way you describe things is certainly original, but it makes it very hard to read. I would like to read this story, but the way you write it out as a movie makes it really confusing.
Benesound chapter 10 . 1/2/2007
"but you could’ve at least made me taller!”

:D I loved that line! :)

Great story!
krashkart chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
Interesting concept and you are quite good at descriptive prose when describing the scenes, but I am finding it hard to get into your world. The presentation doesn't lend itself well to immersion into the story.