|Reviews for Sharpshooter and The Ice Princess|
| Sasha Hughes chapter 8 . 10/30/2012
| Secret chapter 7 . 4/2/2012
This was really good! :) When will you make chapter 7?
| Becoming-Obsessed chapter 8 . 11/30/2008
Man, I love this story! Update soon! :)
| xXxLady Of SorrowxXx chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
| redwalgrl-RG chapter 8 . 6/27/2007
And by any chance, does that last line have to do with GolphishCracker's deviation? *snicker*
Anyway, I really love this story. It's such an odd pairing, yet you make it work so wonderfully! I can't wait to see more. 0
| the Sayjin Kira chapter 7 . 6/24/2007
I love this story! Archer won't be able to resist falling in love with Riza for long it seems! I think you have me hooked on this couple. You really should continue this story! Is it okay if I rec this in my LJ?
and you gave me an idea for a crack fic! Archer supports Roy Mustang for Fuher because it would mean Riza has to wear a mini skirt to work every day! Bwahahahahah!
| redwalgrl-RG chapter 7 . 6/18/2007
I was talking to GoldphishCrackers last night about this fic! I absolutely adore it.
| Lune732 chapter 7 . 4/11/2007
I have only a thing to say : update please. I like your story because of course it's with Frank Archer but also there's no Kimblee. All the stories I have read are always with Kimblee and even if I like Kimblee, it's annoying to always see Archer in pairing with him. That's why I like yours: there's a pairing but it's with Riza and for the first time she's not in love with Mustang (oh poor Mustang I like the moment she slap him). I like too the way you bescribe the feelings and the thoughts of the characters, especially the ones of Archer: he wants to become Furher and he will use Riza for this but in the same time, he has to fight against the feelings for her and it's very interesting to see what he's thinking about that.
I hope I have been understandable because english is not my language. So update soon please.
| Thrior chapter 5 . 3/22/2007
No. Last chapter. I'm hooked. I really am and I don't usually even like that much romantic stories. But this is definitely one of the exceptions. It's because of the wonderful writing style, the way you portay the characters and the fact that it's about pairing which isn't used often. I really like to read original stories.
I'm really waiting for next chapter .
| Thrior chapter 4 . 3/22/2007
I loved Riza's and Archer's conversation and the little argument between Roy and Archer. They were so in character.
‘Feelings are for sissy boys.’ That's like Archer I know XD.
I'm really glad that this fic is processing slowly and realistically. It's not one of those lame fics where two people just meet, stop to think for a moment and then decide that they love each other and then it's just sex all the way. No NO! That's not the right way to write a story like this.
| Thrior chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
Lovely chapter again. Oh... and I forgot to mention that I love that Runa XD. She's annoying yes, but also funny with her blabbering and especially because she thinks she's in love with Archer.
I really liked how you decribed Archer's thoughts about Riza. Unlike some authours you don't make him look like some sex-hungry maniac who would rape his co-workers because of the fun of it. I totally agree that he would refuse to let anything ruin his spotless record. He just seems like that type of guy to me. After all... he wants to be the best.
| Thrior chapter 2 . 3/22/2007
Great chapter again . The way you decribed Archer's calm and lonely way of living is something which I have always thought to suit him. He's pretty antisocial after all and totally devoted to his job.
Only bad think I noticed was one little spelling mistake:
"She tugged off his boots and wiggled his toes in his socks."
Looks like you accidentally typed "she" instead of "he".
Other than that there was nothing bad to say about this.
| Thrior chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
Why the hell this fic has only 3 reviews? I mean seriously... It's AWESOME. I truly enjoyed this chapter. Your writing style is decribing and lively and I just love the way you have portrayed the characters. Also... I really like this because it's about Archer. You don't see much fics with him and on top of that this is not about KimbleexArcher like almost every fic I have seen so I'm really glad I found this. I could totally portray him in a same way as you. He seem to be calm quiet guy so I could totally believe that he would like cats and jazz music. Also... I really like your way of describing Riza.
Great work with this.
| kokema chapter 3 . 2/10/2007
mmh, nice story. your aspect on both Riza and Archer is unique and interesting.
the only thing that can be downward are the spelling mistakes, but they are rare so it really isn't a problem.
the types of you who can write a story as good and entertaining as this is the exact reason I hang aroud this website.
going to definitely and patiently wait your next update.
| coline chapter 3 . 1/24/2007
I really love this story! Please keep writing!