|Reviews for My name forevermore|
| Kate Bridges chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
i love this poem, it has really good imagery in it. i love "without an honest heart as compass"
and "my flower, withered between pages 2 and 3" it sounds like she's stuck in the middle of a decision that will change her life, change who she is.
i really liked it just as a poem, and while i like the "storyish, word i just made up" bits in between, maybe you could separate them into a story and a poem. but that's just another one of my ideas.
thank you this was great! you really are a great writer!