|Reviews for Hey Jealousy|
| Gin Nanashi chapter 8 . 1/29
I've got little to say except that you've done a great job with this story and I've definitely enjoyed reading it. The character and relational developments were very well timed, I feel, and the ending is quite open because life continues to go on. All in all, very nicely done and many thanks for writing and posting this! :D
P.S. Them disclaimer jokes were a cute addition as well. x3
| Watanuki-sama chapter 8 . 12/3/2013
This is the cutest thing ive read in a while. I'm hoping that the "there is no coincidence only inevitability" thing was a holic reference. Because if it isn't then I didn't catch any.
| TheSecretMarauder chapter 8 . 10/6/2013
This is awesome! I really loved this! I loved te way you wrote all the characters especially Ryou. Awesome job!
| TexasDreamer01 chapter 8 . 9/22/2013
(References? There were references? o.O)
| TexasDreamer01 chapter 5 . 9/21/2013
I've been cackling like a moron this entire chapter.
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/28/2013
wow...this is a very interesting story so far.
| ChibiDarkGirl chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
I've just spent 3 hours of my time reading this wonderful fic. I love the characterization of Atemu nd Yugi. Now I'm off to bed since its 3 am.
| Noremac1 chapter 8 . 3/16/2012
That was really good! It made me cry, which is weird, because I almost never cry while reading. So, nice job! Favorites list. Yup.
| bostafu chapter 8 . 1/11/2012
Yaay finally together! Lol I dunno how atemu is going to keep the - won't be possesive - thing... but at least he'll try.
| bostafu chapter 7 . 1/10/2012
They were flirting?
I mean yea there were instances where they got closer than normal. BUT right before they kissed there were signs of flirting? Omg I'm as oblivious as Yugi when it comes to these things.
| bostafu chapter 5 . 1/10/2012
Man, I'm sorry, I JUST noticed all the jokes you had in the disclaimer. lol they're very good, nice witty jokes. I went back to read through all of them XD.
And yeeeees. They've made up! Good job Otagi (big credits for making Atem move), Ryou (definitely for having insight), and Anzu (just cuz Atem needs that little more forcefulness and nagging XD).
Gosh I've got to say, I REALLY like your characters! They're really well made. None of them appear to be shallow, and if they are it's only because they don't have enough screen time.
| bostafu chapter 4 . 1/10/2012
Thank god I love Anzu! OMG thank youu for putting Anzu in a good light. I mean she has that bitchy attitude but in a good way, more like the nagging lecturing woman with good intentions. Everyone else puts her as a rival but in a bad, evil, cunning, omg she's such a bitch, kind of way. But here she's a rival, or used to be, but she's a good rival that helps the other in the end to get the guy/girl. And in here she likes Yugi not Atem! And everything is so believable too! I dunno everything just fits into place perfectly. I mean I can never imagine Anzu actually liking Yugi. But I totally believe it when in middle school, back when everybody liked Yugi, Anzu liked Yugi and she was fighting over him with Atem I can soooo totally imagining it! I don't know why it's such a fitting picture.
Anyways... unfortunately I can't describe to you how great your fic is.. (
| bostafu chapter 3 . 1/10/2012
Come on! Come on!
OMG. This fic is gonna drive me crazy! Ahhh! Anyways don't worry that's totally a good thing, a compliment.
I'm just waiting, anticipating for them to somehow get together again!
| bostafu chapter 2 . 1/10/2012
Why is everything turning out so bad for Atem! Gosh damnit!
Ughhh I understand what's it's like to be in Yugi's position... or I feel like I've been in a similar position... BUT STILL! Come on! You forgave the person who tried to kill you and hurt your friends, at LEAST listen to Atem! OMG PLEASE. T-T
I feel like I've been in Atem's position before too so I understand what he did, and it's completely his fault for running away for so long.
*Sigh* damn I feel for Ryou and Anzu too, but they're making things wooorse T-T Gah it's such one big cluster puck.
It makes me think of similar situations and made me rethink of my past actions
| bostafu chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Gah! You got me! Fell in love on the first chapter! My heart throbbed so many times! Damn... poor Atem and Yugi. Cmon Atem be a man! You've been running away for 4 years! It's only gonna get worse and harder!