Reviews for The Change Threw Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is awesome! I really like to so far. It's so cool that Ithilwen turned into a fox demon! Maybe Casey has special powers or something other than a physical change...anyway, update soon! I want them to meet Inu and Sess :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesooommmeee! UPDATE! I LOVE this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story and I can't wait to see what happens next! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh please update i wanna see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, good job! Get someone to read the story before you post the next chapter so you can catch errors that spellcheck can't. But it's a great plot and an interesting story so far, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story hope u update soon. I want to know what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your characters are a bit sue-ish. But it can be fixed. 3rd paragraph should be broken up. It's a giant block of words. Very confusing. |