Great story so far and great retribution for the Dursleys. Some truly unique elements and must be the first time I can remember seeing the Queen feature in a story, what a turnaround!

Fantastic story.

Why is everyone hating on this story? So far it's great, it's a bit confusing yes and incorrect but it's still great.

There was too much of a time skip from the sorting to Harry being part of Slytherin and really... pairing Tonks with Severus? Sorry, I just can't continue reading this.

This is a super confusing chapter. You seemed to have jumped between different parts of the story without connecting the ideas in a way that makes sense. I don’t think the way you go from Harry sitting on the stool, to Dumbledore using a time turner, to what’s happening in the hall very well. The flow seemed as if you were writing out one idea, then jumped into another one without completing the other idea. There should have been more attention to Harry’s sorting. Dumbledore, would most likely not use a time turner in front of the whole school just to look into the future, which isn’t how a time turner works anyways. You don’t show any interaction between Severus and Harry besides that when he’s underneath the hat, so when you had them leave together, it didn’t make sense. You have good ideas I just don’t think they are played out very well.

Man if he gets with tonks im quitting this book plus did anybody even ask harry if he wants a "mom" and how they gonna just try and force snape to get married

Reading this chapter got confusing. I take it you included the dividers between the Dumbledore/Fawkes and Severus/Tonks scenes and they didn’t transfer over? I’d suggest a line of equal signs, or another symbol. That should do it.

Feed the Dursleys to Ahhsitha! After a full explanation how they looked after HER hatchling.

Wtf is this so Dumbles just is a self insert who knows whole story that's kind of a turn off

After reading a few chapter and reading the recents comments i have one question where the fuck are the hate comments this story is trash so where the fuck is the people saying its trash its trash please i just wasted an hour

Narcissa has way to much influence on their lives

Sorry? He used the time turner to tell the future? That’s not how it works at all

Amazing and I can't wait for more

So a Basilisk drives away spiders and eat them. Where can I learn parsulsmouth and have one

Only Snape's glare can be encouraging