Reviews for The Tiniest Wish
selkie chapter 37 . 1/26
They say if you can't say something nice, don't say anything, but then you'd never get any constructive criticism.
Narcissa is the biotch from hell, she's Dumbledore all over again: You two get married, you fetch Eileen from seclusion, and you go clean up your tracks.
You have her overpower all other characters in the story. She says "Jump" and they say "How high?"
I enjoyed how you had Severus slowly coming under Harry's spell, caring for him and then adopting him.
And I enjoyed the rites of Slytherin House, and how the students were set up in groups to study, compete and protect one another.
But I really don't like the character of Nymphadora Tonks. The only person I dislike more, when thinking of a female with Severus, is Hermione. Was the marriage really necessary to the plot, or just an opportunity for Narcissa to tell people what to do?
So, I've made it to this point hanging on by my fingernails, but with Narcissa suddenly going all Dark Lord, herself ("You truly have no concept of what I can be capable of."), I'm getting off the train at this chapter.
I hope you have success in your commercial writing.
Guest chapter 36 . 1/10
Hate this story, sorry. Severus was fine in the beginning, and it's a very good plot line up to chapter 33ish where Severus got weak. He's a master of the mind arts, why is Narcissa so powerful? She beats everybody, and I hate it. It's horribly annoying. :S
HonorGuard Ra chapter 44 . 12/12/2014
I chewed my way through this story in one night and I love it. Why haven't you updated it in three years?
goodpie2 chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Did you just tell us the plot of the entire fic? Because that's kind of awesome and hilarious.
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 6 . 7/23/2014
What the heck is going on? so confusing? one minute Harry is saying Ron didn't cause my scar to hurt, then suddenly snape says legillimens and starts laughing... wtf is going on?
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 3 . 7/23/2014
Damn, I'd hope harry would be smart enough to realize that the police were angry at the family not the girl.
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 2 . 7/23/2014
Scary.
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
Sounds awesome.
Phoniex Fire Pixie chapter 44 . 5/16/2014
I love your story I can't wait to read more hope to be able to do so soon
hi there chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
i dont know if you even get on here anymore but if you do and happen upon this review i have but a few words for you. AMAZING EPIC BEST STORY ABOUT HARRY BEING SLYTHERIN EVER WROTE. more than a few words i know but nothing that didnt need to be said
licha.s chapter 44 . 4/12/2014
this story is awesome.. really AU but still great.. too bad it went on hiatus. i do hope that you get some time to continue it eventually though
Pathseekerme chapter 44 . 3/23/2014
I love this story! You've done a fantastic job with this... I can't wait to see what you do with Millie and Harry-especially since Madame Bulstrode was so rude and threw Millie at Harry's Grandmother, saying she would be nothing but trouble.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/4/2014
This is Bollux
SuperSaiyanTeemo chapter 44 . 12/26/2013
Great work, only problem i could think of is that snape can really put a hold on the story while you're trying to figure out what he is saying in simpleton words, but that's in character so snape's fault and not yours
Ethyrin Kairos chapter 22 . 12/17/2013
Lol, I can't wrap my mind around to image of Snape on pointe and doing jete enterlace in tights lol.
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