According to the lexicon, Tonks was in 7th year when Harry was in his first. You're advancing her age by what? 5 years?

honestly I wasn't expecting Tonks and Snape

For one that mess can be avoided by locating and destroying all the Horcruxes. And the more I read and hear of the Wizarding World the more disgusted I am with it the more I believe the majority need to be stripped of their magic and many to lose their lives by execution because they are just too dangerous. And I don't give a shit about people who ate against the death penalty especially those who have never experience having loved one murdered. And think life in prison is good enough not thinking about the criminals have a chance of escaping the prison and going back to what put them there in the first place. Plus it was our heavenly Father who institutes the death penalty in the first place and spelled out the crimes that would result in receiving such a penalty. Plus the heavenly father also instituted penalties for giving false testimonies also referred to as a false witness. Which means give a false witness that results in an innocent losing their life you lose your own. But unfortunately, too many nations do not obey that law which means that those who do not have the moral fortitude and conscience to only tell the truth but lie that results in an innocent losing their life for killing someone and the guilty get away it they don't fear to lose their lives for it. Plus the same should be the case lie and accuse someone of another crime that causes an innocent to life their freedom those lyers need to lose their freedom and be forced to pay compensation for lost wages and any amounts of money that person would have saved for emergencies and retirement.

I really hate this marriage contract bullshit and prearranged marriages are bullshit and wrong especially when made for minors are especially wrong. I would outlaw them that the individuals have to be 20 years old before they can be written as prenuptial agreements for the purpose of protecting family assets from being stolen keeping fund separate between the two families. The two individuals have to actually want each other. Not forced on each other. Thus helping to protect the families from gold diggers. Because most prearranged marriages are and were for money and power, not love. Which is not what marriage was meant to be married was meant for love which would then lead to children to continue on the families and bloodlines.

Plus many traditions are bullshit and contrary to that of what our heavenly Father and creator had meant for all humanity. Plus many traditions are so wrong and evil they result in abuse of power and abuse of their fellow humans along with abuse and destruction of the planet and it's environment which includes the plant and animal life. Plus many traditions lack proper morals and ethics to teach the difference between right and wrong along with good and evil. And the consequences of one's actions and behavior.

really nice of Draco's family to help harry potter!

When will Harry go back to Hogwarts. Plz update soon.

I love the way you had all the witches and wizards point their wands at Vernon for the way he hurt Harry.

Draco's dad is nice to Harry potter this time sometimes he can be not so nice.

the Slytherin's really care for harry potter cute!

I knew this story was in hiatus, and I read it anyway. I hope that life and issues can be resolved and you can return. After all, it's only been eight years, and I have seen others that have been finished after a longer interim. I enjoyed your story. It was inventive, intriguing and well woven. I hope you do return, if for nothing else for a summary of what you wanted to happen.
You do need an editor for missing words, repeated words and grammar issues. But, this is fanfiction, what else should I expect? Even books I've read, that should have had editors who know what they are doing, sometimes have these same issues.
More questions...
How and why did the Dark Mark transfer to Harry? Can they get it off since it came off of Severus?
What happened to Quirrel and Morty (Lord Voldie) in first year? Was there a troll? I know the bathroom incident didn't happen, but was there even a troll? Will Millie and Harry remain friends, or will they actually continue on and marry? What about the Potters and their title? Will Morty find out about Harry being closely related? What will the outcome be of that revelation? Will Dumbles mess up trying to rectify what he sees as mistakes? I have so many questions, but will stop here.

What is the seven? - installing a witch in the seven...are they those who were abused?
And is the oath that was broken from the beginning of the year where no one was to speak of hidden secrets? If so, what secret was spoken?
And Tonks was a 'puff, not a Gryffindor.

So she would be a Prince...so what of the Potter's Ancient and Noble name?

I really have a problem with Millicent. It is difficult to get my head around canon. She's physically large & strong, and she was one of Dolores Umbridge's Inquisitorial Squad.

From the HP Lexicon: "Black-haired (or Hermione wouldn’t have made her mistake), with a square build and heavy jaw, Millicent was “no pixie” in her second year (referring to her size and build); by their fifth year she was still able to physically overpower Hermione. Both Ron and Harry consider Millicent ugly; she reminds Harry in particular of a hag."

I'm not sure what she looks like in your story. But since they are twelve. TWELVE. and she sticks her tongue in his mouth? And she doesn't actually really like him that way, and he wants to save her from her troubles so he asks for a betrothal. She doesn't deserve him. I know that time will tell, but I think she'd make a better friend than sweetheart, especially since she wants Draco and sees harry as a means to stay close to him.

I hope you explain what exactly happened to make Severus' tattoo float off of him and attach itself to Harry. If 'wish' magic, couldn't he wish it off? if not - WTH?

Why does everything happen to Harry? So will he be able to catch up to his yearmates, or will he have to go to class without his friends?