Is this story abandoned?
It is very interesting .. although the time jumps and lack of segues between chapters really keeps the reader on their toes!?

What's up with Albus and the blasted Time Turner?

How did Albus & Figg miss this extreme case of abuse?
With his Time Turner, Albus must have been able to foresee it?

Who did Lucius give the Diary to in this iteration?
How did Diary-Tom return?

How did the goblins not know Eileen Prince lived?

I can't believe that the Dark Lord never had an inheritance test? His mother died immediately after his birth... how did he discover the Gaunts? Wouldn't be have thought near-squib Merope might have had a liaison with a powerful dark wizard given his own genius and demonstrable magical gifts...?

In your AU backstory, Aren't the Prince and Gaunt line related...? Wouldn't Tom have recognized Severus as a relative?

The only thing that I have to male this better so far is take the time Turner moments out of the first or was it second chapter let those be a surprise and I feel one the story will flow better and two those such as shapes adoption or malfoys betrayal of voldemort or siririous' exclusion will need better portrayed

AHHHHH XD XD XD I KNEW IT TONKS BAHAHAHAHAHAHA

XD XD XD XD LOL HARRY SEV

AHHHHHHHHH OW OW OW OW OW OW. OWWWWWWWWWW THAT WOULD HURT YIKES MERLINS BERAD HARRY GO HARRY ARE YOU OKAY AHHHHHHH

XD XD XD XD GO SEV GO HARRY GO DRACO

Awwww poor harry

EEEEEEEK ITS SO ADORABLE I LOVE IT GO SEV WOOOO AWWWW harry

Wow, i really enjoyed this. Harry becoming one with the dance was great. Tonks is great, and apparently likes the professor. He has no chance! He is doomed to matrimony.

Oh boy - poor Severus. There is no hope for him.

What a great leader you have made Snape in this story. Just what all abused children need is someone like this. Very well done.

Wait, did you really just give the whole plot of the story?...Oh well.

*clique

Hmm... Telling the future but even a timeturner can be wrong if a different decision is made so all that has been shown the skeleton of the story very interesting, I love it. Hasn't been done before this way and has a wonderful flair all in all masterfully done.

This story is so confusing. What the heck happened in this chapter?! What were Severus and Tonks fighting about, and what did Severus and Narcissa do to Tonks that she was so mad? Why is Harry asking to court Millicent, and when did you mention that Narcissa had planned the whole thing between Harry and Millicent? Harry did that on his own I think, for what I can understand in this story. Why are they raising him like such a high society member, it seems as if the Malfoys are raising him, not Severus. And did Tonks and Severus marry? Please clarify more.