Reviews for Family
Sybretooth chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Very, very nice ending. Great story!
GuesssWho chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
We are the hollow men indeed.
Luzith chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
awsome story. but sad ending. and nice characterization
Lady-Yui chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
This story was just... wow. Really good!
pulmicort7 chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
Aw man, that was so sad! Makes me feel sorry for John. I wish it had ended differently, cuz I love happy endings but I think then it would have been OOC. A beautifully written story, thanx!
arliddian chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
Wow. This was a really brilliant fic. You've provided such an amazing insight into Pyro and Mystique, and I have never read a fic with this kind of premise before. It was just amazing.

Wow. :)
Maid of the Mer chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
Oh! That was way cool! ]

Maid of the Mer
HazyCrazy chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
Wow, I've never read anything like this before! What a unique storyline. You wrote Pyro's character really well, and I liked that there was just a little bit of humanity in him. The end really did shock me!

"It was deceiving, the fire. It pulled you in with its promise of warmth and comfort, then it burned you and destroyed you."

That was my favourite line.

Well done!
wingedraksha chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
Whoa. I'm kinda shell-shocked here. Definately was not expecting that ending, though I guess I should have. You write John so well! I'm, again, in awe. But... the puppy? Was just taking it's first breath when you kicked it.