|Reviews for The Light of Stars|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
THEY HAVE TO BE TOGETHER FOREVER ...ok that's some good ass story there! A to you It rose so many emotions ah! why must you make me feel so much! I love you and continue
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
If u hate the ending then either change it or write more :/
| EternalFalsity chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
I adore the way you ended it by acknowledging they can give it a shot, it's better to try even if it doesn't last forever
| AkiraYaoi chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Tis a good story you have there. :D
| LyssieB chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Goddamn that was some of the hottest stuff I've ever read. You got really in depth with their bond, it was awesome, excellent fic!
| ZoeDucky chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
...This story is amazing. I don't think I have been so moved in ages. It was so packed full of emotion and heart ache but also love and adoration. It was simply beautiful. You are a brilliant writer :)
| BrokenDoll'sWishes chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
your like, REALLY good! wish i could write HALF as good as you...
PLEASE, OH PLEASE! TELL ME WHAT WAS ON THE CLIPBOARD IN
Reaching for Moonlight! PWEASE? I'LL BE YOUR BESTEST FRIEND!
| cyberangle chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
the ending made me cry TT
| Chidori no Tenshi chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Hi, there. :D (By the way, this review applies for both this story and "Reaching For Moonlight".
Okay. So, I have to start off by saying that I would not change a SINGLE DAMN THING in both of these stories, if I could. Now, I say this sometimes to other authors, because I happen to be in a good mood at that time, or if it's just one of the better stories that I've read in a while. I know, it's really irresponsible of me to do that. Sorry to those authors. :( But this time, when I say that I really WOULD NOT CHANGE A THING in these stories, I mean it. It's the first time I've ever meant it, and I'm just so overwhelmed because I'm such a picky editor, and I keep looking and looking but I CAN'T FIND ANTYING I WANT TO CHANGE!
You're such a good author. That's an understatement, but I feel that if I use bigger words, it would sound phony, and then the meaning would be lost.
I love how your sentences flow. Your beautiful sentences make the story easy to read, and yet they are also able to create such complicated, lingering images at the same time. I truly envy you.
I also love every reaction from both Kaoru and Hikaru. They seem pretty in-character, that's for sure!
Your grammar and spelling are also very good. I mean, not perfect (I don't think any single human on this earth can have perfect grammar all the time), but that's okay, since the plots were so coaxing that I forgot all about grammar.
One more thing before I conclude this dumb review: Well, the ending for "The Light of Stars" was a bit too abrupt for me, but I liked it all the same. The way it ended left me with a fuzzy, fluffy feeling in my chest. I think it's pretty symbolic too, how the story ended so unexpectedly, just like how the twins do unexpected things. Both the story and the twins are unpredictable.
But anyway, all in all, I don't think I've ever been so impressed by an Ouran fic. Thanks for sharing your awesome writing skills. :)
| Daoiki chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Augh...now I'm crying DX I already have a cold, this story is AWESOME, and the twins have such a bittersweet relationship! When I started crying, my brother looked at me and said "Shit, is the gay-porn really that bad..?" augh...he just doesn't get it. I have to end this because I need some tissues );
| BloodyPoisonKiss chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
HAWT! I love it! ur such a good writer!
| loVes-LoVe chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Probably the best story I have ever read..honestly ..wow u are wonderfull!
| 801-chan chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
Aw poor Hikaru :( That was really good _ me like lots!
| ainulaadne chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
TRI-LO-GY! TRI-LO-GY! xD
Love it. The first HikaKaoru (I don't actually know what the pairing name is. Does it need one? Psh.) smut I read was sort of shittastic and so I abandoned it for a long time. But THIS. This is good. This is.. good. Me gusta.
| Ukitake chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
omG, i've just finished reading both your stories -well, at least the first and this part of the story- and i found it wonderful. Just one or two mistakes but hey, nobody's perfect. And that was pretty good, considering it wasn't beta'd. Anyway, interesting Kyouya/Kaoru pairing -i quite like it actually-, and also i liked the way you wrote it, not too long and not too short. Ah, sad ending. Well, not sad... just an open ending, so you can finish it whenever you like ;) . -yeah, that's me telling you to make another sequel to this xD-