|Reviews for Isn't It Wonderful?|
| OasisQuantum2013 chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
great story but it should have been longer i skipped the lyrics
| KageOkami-Kogo chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Aw! That was cute! It felt a bit rushed and could have had a tad more emotional responses to things...
(I would have expected Tidus to blush like crazy and stutter when she stood before him in her undergarments lol she's the one that changed a bit, not him... he's still a nervous goof XD)
Great job though! So sweet! Keep up the good work _
| Necron Dragon Lord of D.A chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Isn't It Wonderful?
Yes, it is.
| Sharley Keen chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Great Work! I see no problems here. Allow me to share my funnyness with you.
Yu Nah cooking? Yeh dude.
Ok, that was random, but so was one part in your story! Keep writing!
| Ariana Aislinn chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
Very sweet! Believable, in character, and very very sweet.
One tiny little suggestion. Sometimes your paragraph breaks don't fit quite right, and you end up with dialogue matched up next to descriptions of the wrong person's actions. It's always best to start a new paragraph when you switch characters. Just a thought.
Other than that, quite good! I enjoyed it.
| redensemble chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!
but I loved it.
| Warui-Usagi chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
| Blue Jae chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
Aw...that is so sweet...Good job!
| PrincessKunoichi chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
Hey Nice Story!
It was so sweet! I loved it!