|Reviews for In the Dark|
| CindyT63 chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Love this one! Love the ending, too! I'd call it Hurt/comfort, for sure!
| Libbydibbs chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
I really love this story. I keep rereading it because it's so awesome. I just love the ending and how you write the brothers. Thank you for writing it!
| sami1010220 chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
| DeansSammy chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
great story and i so loved the thing with the pin at the end
| Rachelly chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
This is a great read...so tense, so amazingly well written. Dean's emotions were so real...so mixed. He's angry at the demon, his hatred of what it is doing/has done to his brother seething from him and, in contrast, his fear and pain for his little brother trapped inside. Having to hurt Sam's body to get rid of the Demon to save Sam. What a dilemma! I was so surprised to find the demon was in Sam's body, too! Great twist! This was excellent! What a great read! Thanks for sharing your creative genius with us!
| calliopechild chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Hands down, my favorite part of this is the "I'm a happy puppy!" look you mentioned. Holy freaking crap, I'm still giggling. Mainly 'cause any version of a look like that, at least that I can picture in my head, is utterly hysterical.
"I'm a happy puppy!" *snicker* Thank you for that. :D
| CeCe Away chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Excellent. Very good story. I enjoyed it muchly.
| Ringelsocke chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
I like your story! Most of all the pin! *lol*
| calcium77 chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
This one was awesome as well! I really should get some work done...but I fear I might read a few more of your stories! If I get fired...it will be your fault for being kind of awesome! :)
| LoserAnthem89 chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
This story is incredible! At first I had no idea that the demon was inside Sam's body. Very captivating :)
| K Hanna Korossy chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
This is one of my favorite possession stories. From Sam's coming back briefly to plead with Dean-and advise him-to the cotton candy fingernails to Dean not always knowing when it's too early to joke. There's something that feels very real and right and believable about this, and it makes it the more moving. Neat fic.
| kirallie chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Glad they saved Sam! Poor Dean having to do that to his brother's body. Poor Sam being trapped like that. Good work!
| Ms Hobgoblin chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Okay, so this review is a little late in coming - but better late than never, right?
Really loved this story, what a twist!
Looking forward to reading your other stories.
| Angelbyname chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Best story I've read yet, great twist and angst! Love your style
| bubblesquirt chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
Dean can't see any pupils at all. He idly wonders how the fucker can see. Decides he doesn't really care.
"Where's Sam?" Dean repeats. One finger taps idly against the bottle of water.
-The threat is so clear here. I got shivers.
He shouts Cristo until the word loses all meaning. He might as well shout sofa or glue gun for all the effect it has.
But it's a little hard to concentrate when there's a huge fucking neon sign blinking in your head that reads get sammy.
Yes, he fucked up. But he will unfuck it up.
It turns on Sam and laughs. "You think that nursery rhyme will work on me, boy?"
He wants to let himself feel hope. Or relief.
But it's too dangerous to feel either.
-So sad, but true.
Sure, his body is here. But Sam is long gone. Someplace where Dean can't touch him.
Between the hazelnut, caffeine and stress Dean stays awake.
Dean yanks at the wheel, and he shouts Jesus Christ! not sure if he's swearing or praying.
-Fricking love this sentence.
"I'm here, Sam. It's me, Dean. I'm here. It's okay," and it's a huge fucking lie but it's the best he can do.
Sam radiates panic.
"Sam gave me a message," Dean says.
The demon grins. "Was it goodbye?"
He tries hard to forget that it's Sam's flesh that's burning.
-Yeah I was wondering about that. Everything he's doing to the demon he's ultimately doing to Sam. Which is heartbreaking!
Bobby studies the demon for a moment, then says, "The chains should hold." But he knows that's not what Dean meant.
He needs to hurt Sam to save him.
For once he's glad to hear Sam cry. It's beautiful because it means he's alive.
Sam is afraid to believe.
Sam wants to say, I can fucking fly, now that the demon's gone, but settles for, "I think so."
When he wakes up on the next morning to find out Dean painted his fingernails cotton candy pink, he reserves the reverence for Bobby alone.
Dean moves between them. "You're so smart," he says in a sing song voice. "No, you're smarter. No, you are. No, it's totally you." He makes a disgusted face.
Dean pokes his baked potato. "It's a potato, dude. You can't really ruin a baked potato. With enough melted cheese, anything's edible."
-Typical Dean response. You write him amazing.
He knows humor is Dean's medicine. He'll try to swallow it down.
Sam frowns at the button. Red capital letters proclaim: "I'm too sexy to be possessed."
Dean has his thoughtful face on. "It's not true of course, but the demons probably won't know." He shrugs. "I mean, by the time they figure out you're a huge nerd, we'll be long gone."
Sam just stares, torn between laughing and being pissed. "I can't believe you," he finally says.
Dean nods. "I know. I'm a great brother. You don't have to say it." He puts a hand to his heart. "I can feel it right here."
Sam opens the pin back and pulls at the long pin. "That's not the only thing you're going to feel."
"Hey, wait a minute! What are you doing with that?"
-Such an amazing ending, I had to copy and paste the whole thing!
What a great oneshot. I'm so surprised you don't have more reviews than you do. Your stories are awesome!