|Reviews for Kairi's Giving In|
| Unicorn-in-the-TARDIS chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
| Porporino the III chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
That was a pretty good drabble you did. You could definitely expand on it if you wanted to. Hopefully you post more work for others to see soon.
(Quick little critique though, you should try and set the big paragraph into smaller paragraphs so it'll be easier to read, but that's really the only thing).