Reviews for Catch 22 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I loved the whole thing, especially Temari being upset that first time she found out she wasn't pregnant, and then Kankurou finding it. And the ending was sweet. And the Sand Siblings. Great writing. |
![]() ![]() wow i read this story like 5 times nice job! ] |
![]() ![]() nice job wow i love your story ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() My new favorite line: “Oh yes I am,” Chouji said menacingly. “If there’s indecent exposure, I’m telling the Hokage on you.” I love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah :):) i love this fanfic.. lol its so ~shikatema love~ lol long story too/ couldnt kept my eyes off it XP |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was completely awesome. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG! Shikamaru crying when he sees her is the most amazing thing ever! This is a true jewel of Shikamaru/Temari, and I enjoyed every bit of it. |
![]() ![]() OMG...that your fic is so...AW That end is so beautiful! Great work, great fic! I hope you write more shikatema fics thankyou very much for that amazing history! kissus |
![]() ![]() ![]() *inhales deeply* [I'm not going to cry, I'm not going to cry] That was...beautiful. I'm so glad I stumbled upon this story. It was without a doubt the best Shikamaru/Temari fic I've ever read. I loved every minute of it. And the ending...OMG...the ending was perfect. *inhales deeply* You just made my night. Thanks for writing a story that was so filled with emotions, drama and ...erhm...love (winks). Great fic. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is one of the most wonderful fan fictions I've ever read. I just love how well-paced and believable it is. Thank you so much for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very very nice, one of the best ShikaTema stories around here, I'm sure! The way you describe the ninja world through their eyes is great... I really like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow., thats so lovely! the ending fine you know! it pleases me too.. :D _ laterz. |
![]() ![]() ![]() VERY cute. I like the flow of your writing, and how you don't follow any of the cliche'd methods of where to start and end your chapters... And I like how each chapter is long, because you never quite know how much time is going to pass in the chapter, and then you finish the chapter with this feeling of lazily having watched a day in the life of your characters, which fits in very nicely with Shikamaru. You are amazing at maintaining the characters' personalities, especially considering that they are so much older in this fic. Very well done! I like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending pleases me as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wah! An EXCELLENT beginnig! Awesome! Yey, I love it. It's ShikaTema, after all! It's a pity I can't read more now cause it's midnight here and dad says I have to go...School tomorrow... But be sure that I'll keep on tomorrow! And am I the 300th reviewer? Or is it just me? |